BTNDeepWoodLunaEnchantress

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04:46, 16th Aug 2012
Apheraz Lucent: Splendid! Now, if there was only a fitting model...

 

[I3lackDeath]

PLEASE show me the big image of this one.

 

[JollyD]

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

The face is pretty good in my opinion. The shading could be better. But I personally like it! But I still feel like you're being harsh on your shadings. They get a bit dark.

 

[I3lackDeath]

Jolly, I can't see the big image you posted, there seems to be some kind of error.

I wanted to see it because with this icon, you actually managed to create distinguished shapes (the elf stands out from the background and features pretty crisp edges), hence I wanted to check if you did something differently.

Also, did you use some sort of reference for the face? Your previous attempts on faces were not nearly as good as this one.

 

[Panda]

The shading seems messy, clean it up a little.

 

[JollyD]

I have also posted this in my dev profile
and I will fix that error here.

 

[I3lackDeath]

Yeah, I just checked it out on dA.

Now I see that you made her stand out with a black line, creating a shadow that is hardly visible on the icon, yet will emboss it. Well done!

You should add some shading to the lower part of her neck, to make it look like it's beneath all that hair.

Nothing else to add, besides that I'd like to know if you used a reference or not.

 

[JollyD]

Yeah, I just checked it out on dA.

Now I see that you made her stand out with a black line, creating a shadow that is hardly visible on the icon, yet will emboss it. Well done!

You should add some shading to the lower part of her neck, to make it look like it's beneath all that hair.

Nothing else to add, besides that I'd like to know if you used a reference or not.

Here the references I was looking on which when drawing

See references (warning - big images!)

 

[I3lackDeath]

I see. You did well on the face, Jolly. It would be a good move to practice and create some more icons with faces to improve your understanding of face structures etc.

You could also define the ear a little bit more, but that's just my perfectionism speaking.

 

[JollyD]

I see. You did well on the face, Jolly. It would be a good move to practice and create some more icons with faces to improve your understanding of face structures etc.

You could also define the ear a little bit more, but that's just my perfectionism speaking.

Thanks ^D

 

[8512590215848]

Nice face but as always - need more.. mmm... accuraty; most of ur works looks messy.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Hair is a bit unnatural.

 

[Cakedog345]

Nice paint over !

 

[Narandza]

Hair is a bit unnatural.

What are you talking about her face is quite life-life and pretty?

 

[Sin'dorei300]

What about this reference pic?

 

[JollyD]

yes, this pic was used was used