Blood Vs Storm

[Moderator]

14:06, 23rd Feb 2009
Rui: This might be the fourth of fifth map from you I'm rejecting. I'd recommend you use EpicWar instead (check the images at the bottom).
[highlight]Rejected[/code].

 

[Soulwert]

It was really hard worked on plz approve it

 

[APproject]

It was really hard worked on plz approve it

Are you joking me? You're telling that you worked hard on this hour-make map?

No balance at all. I played this single player and I killed all the creeps in the middle with ease.

The only trigger is this:

I asure you that this will not be approved if you won't improve balance and victory / defeat conditions.

1/5 Rating fits best, at least for now.

 

[Soulwert]

Your the worst firendlist person

Really , you need to give me a life. im only in 5th grade.
GOD give me a break , seriously , Poke the ogre is just a small script and its major.

 

[APproject]

Your the worst firendlist person

Rofl, this made me laugh for real.

It's not about age, it's about the experience you have and you have not much. Don't expect your bad quality maps to get approved only because you're in 5th grade. You must improve yourself.

This might help you: Warcraft III World Editor, Warcraft III Map Making Tutorials, Warcraft III Scripting, Warcraft III Maps - World-Editor-Tutorials.thehelper.net

Poke the ogre is just a small script and its major.

Umm, what do you mean? I didn't get it.

 

[Soulwert]

Stupid I USE this SITE

 

[APproject]

You do? Well honestly, it doesn't seems so. That site helped me to improve my skills, but it seems it don't help you at all, because your maps are not worth any attention.

I suggest you to start improving your map instead being nervous here and wasting time by talking with me when the things that requires to be improved are clear.

 

[bounty hunter2]

Honestly you wanted a full review? Now you have it:

Here is my rating and comment:

Rating system

Altered Melee:
1 - 10 points go on originality √
1 - 10 points go on terrain √
1 - 10 points go on bug free √
1 - 10 points go on gameplay/fun factor √
1 - 10 points go on lag √
1 - 10 points go on balance
1 - 10 points go on drops
1 - 10 points go on Object editor work √
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting √
1 - 10 points go on scripting √
1 - 10 points go on camera work
1 - 10 points go on music and or voice acting
1 - 10 points go on dialog
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Voting system

Percent	Grade	Status
0 - 34%	1/5	Rejected
35 - 49%	1/5	Reviewed
50 - 64%	2/5	Reviewed
65 - 79%	3/5	Approved
80 - 89%	4/5	Approved
90 - 100%	5/5	Approved

The table may vary if needed.

Originality: 1/10 x
No custom things that make the game fun and original, and the idea is lacking aswell, you have a hero and you fight one, no tactics no nothing.

Object Editor Work: 1/10 x
If it was a melee I wouldn't rate you here but this isn't a melee, I don't know what this is, but it doesn't have any object editor work.

Bug Free: 10/10 √
Worked fine.

Terrain: 2/10 X
Plain, boring, not enough usage of shrubery and dodoads. You used Blizzard cliffs for the center lake and that looks bad, you need heightening.

Scripting: 1/10 X
Melee Initialization
Events
Map initialization
Conditions
Actions
This is supposed to be the only trigger?

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 1/10 X
You and a couple of Blood Mages go and kill Lady Vash? How interesting or fun is that? You need:
- Custom heroes
- Custom items
- The game is way to short
- Custom spells

Lag: 10/10 √
No lag.

Proper submission and crediting: 4/10 X
Spelling errors, more info and images.

In overall: 30 / 80
36% minimal not 50% met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall it is a map that can be made in 5 minutes. It basically contains nothing and I suggest highly avoiding it. Learn more, improve your skills and try to make new original maps.

Good Luck, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

 

[Vicboy]

I killed all of them by myself...

Just be like me, when I was young like you and started playing with world editor, all I did was play around with it... You have to study rather than making maps all day long.

And I'd say this was made in 10 minutes?

I've made a map when I was 5th grader ten times better than this

 

[CMarket]

you need to give me a life.

How can he give you a life? Wait....APproject, are you God?

im only in 5th grade.

So? It's not like we have a rating system that is based on ones age.

Poke the ogre is just a small script and its major.

Poke the angry ogre is an original, scripted map with 3 game mods and plenty of balance. This is just a triggreless spam of creeps in the middle. I defeated this in single player and it was really, really easy. I can't imagine how a full house would be as I can't imagine what can be six times easier than this.

So, to sum up, if you fix the victory/defeat condition, make it way way way way way way way way way way way way more balanced I believe it might be good for a 2/5. Adding some extra spawns, new game mods, an option to repeat the challenge(seeing how it is incredibly short), shops, spawns, secrets and so on you might be looking forward to a higher grade.

But, for now, 1/5. Rejected.

 

[Vicboy]

But, for now, 1/5. Rejected.

Are you sure?

I thought it would be somewhere like 0/5

 

[Septimus]

Really , you need to give me a life. im only in 5th grade.

Honestly enough, being a 5th grader doesn't give any special privilege to create a low quality resources.

Being newbie is not the excuse either. If you do not like negative critique, you have 2 choice.

1) Do not upload useless map that are created at under 30 minutes.
2) Make more research and develop your map much carefully in the future.

Stupid I USE this SITE

Refrain yourself from being a troll, if you do not like a negative critique then do not post any garbage at map section in the future.

 

[Soulwert]

Might as well go work on Soul Rebel TD >_>

 

[Vicboy]

Might as well go work on Soul Rebel TD >_>

I think that would be better... don't forget leaks!

 

[Septimus]

Might as well go work on Soul Rebel TD >_>

Do me a favor, if you just want to work on that map for about 3-5 hours only. Please do not upload to this site. Use epicwar.com instead.

 

[CMarket]

Might as well go work on Soul Rebel TD >_>

Yeah, give up! That'll solve all your problems.[\sarcasm]

If you give up at everything you do than you'll never improve.

 

[Vicboy]

Yeah, give up! That'll solve all your problems.[\sarcasm]

If you give up at everything you do than you'll never improve.

Moving on to something new can improve experience in different ways.

 

[CMarket]

I wasn't talking about that. I was stating that the way he's going he will most likely give up on his TD next.

P.S. Soulwert, your (new) signature made me lol. It's not how long you have been here, it's how active and contributory you have been.

 

[spiritriser]

lol ive noticed something. The same people seem to be going around trolling on everyones map. Tell him how to approve it tell him why its bad. Dont tell him he sucks and you could do better. He may have a much more complicated or semi-entertaining life. Unlike you guys he could have been outside when he was in 4th grade not playing WC3. To tell you the truth im in 7th grade and i make sucky maps. LIGHTEN UP is what im trying to say.

 

[CMarket]

lol ive noticed something. The same people seem to be going around trolling on everyones map. Tell him how to approve it tell him why its bad. Dont tell him he sucks and you could do better. He may have a much more complicated or semi-entertaining life. Unlike you guys he could have been outside when he was in 4th grade not playing WC3. To tell you the truth im in 7th grade and i make sucky maps. LIGHTEN UP is what im trying to say.

What does that have to do with ANYTHING?! We never trolling him because he is young and doesn't know how to make maps. We gave him a critique(you might want to check the definition of the word) and told him that his map was bad. We would have told him that his map was bad if he was 5 years old, 15 years old or 50 years old, it doesn't matter. We aren't trolling, we're reviewing. Just because your standards are much much lower than our, or in fact common sense standards doesn't mean we are trolls.

I can tell that you're new here so I'll tolerate your ignorance, but the people that reviewed here(myself excluded) are one of the best reviewers on the site so you should be learning from them rather than giving them "advice".

Calling someone a no-lifer, when you don't even know them is moronic, especially when not one of the reviewers gave any note to the author of the map that "he should have been making maps instead of going outside".

 

[spiritriser]

Thanks for a vocabulary word XD. Youll tolerate my ignorance? Are you god or something. Will you smite me with holy thunder? How many nations worship you? Well im just saying you could be a bit lighter. Thats all. no-lifer? I dont remember typing that word oh well i guess it happened while i wasnt looking. Frankly its all opinions and they dont matter.

Oh yah. I dont remember calling YOU the troll. I said that there are a lot of trolls. Then you call me ignorant insult my intellegence and continue to be rude.

 

[CMarket]

Unlike you guys he could have been outside when he was in 4th grade not playing WC3

This is where you said the "trolls" are no-lifers.

Youll tolerate my ignorance?

Yes. You obviously don't know that bounty_hunter2 and APProject are great assets to the map reviewers and I understand that you wouldn't, seeing as you are new.

How many nations worship you?

2 so far, hopping to achieve more soon.

Oh yah. I dont remember calling YOU the troll.

You said you see the same bunch of people trolling and since I posted on this post I presumed that included me, how was I to guess otherwise?

Then you call me ignorant insult my intellegence and continue to be rude.

I call you ignorant because that is what you are. Ignorant means that you lack knowledge which you clearly do as you do not know that the guys mentioned earlier are good and objective reviewers.

 

[spiritriser]

Ok. I guess i said, said party unidentified as of yet is a "no lilfer". Not you. Nobody at all. I also see that you do your research on people good job. You figured out i was new to THIS forum. Not any other. Ive already looked around and APproject has looked at a ton of maps. Ive also seen only 1 good graded one. That could just be the quality of the maps. Im also saying some of the ways people grade maps can be a bit harsh for the map makers. Oh yah. How much time talking to people in real life do you get (Rhetorical and not meant to explain hostility but to explain a lack of experience)? You could have figured out that i said "all im saying is LIGHTEN UP." no exclamtion point. You could have asked if you thought i was calling you a no life troll. There were plenty of people who posted here and i didnt even hint that ALL you guys were the trolls. I just said that the same trolls come to the same posts. I never said CMarket. In fact i hadnt even acknowledged that you were on this thread.

 

[bounty hunter2]

I think CMarket has told you everything you need to know. I won't bother with you, since you are new to the site. But please rethink next time before posting.

Thanks

 

[spiritriser]

See thats a nice post lol. Ill hold my tongue.