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13:57, 23rd Feb 2009
Rui: Rejected. The users who commented have provided enough reasons.
Rui: Rejected. The users who commented have provided enough reasons.
(1 ratings)
Rating system
Altered Melee:
1 - 10 points go on originality √
1 - 10 points go on terrain √
1 - 10 points go on bug free √
1 - 10 points go on gameplay/fun factor √
1 - 10 points go on lag √
1 - 10 points go on balance √
1 - 10 points go on drops √
1 - 10 points go on Object editor work
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting √
1 - 10 points go on scripting √
1 - 10 points go on camera work
1 - 10 points go on music and or voice acting
1 - 10 points go on dialog
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Percent | Grade | Status |
0 - 34% | 1/5 | Rejected |
35 - 49% | 1/5 | Reviewed |
50 - 64% | 2/5 | Reviewed |
65 - 79% | 3/5 | Approved |
80 - 89% | 4/5 | Approved |
90 - 100% | 5/5 | Approved |
Points
Originality: 3/10 X
This is some kind of altered melee map. Well you don't have much originality in it, the terrain is ussual and boring, the entire concept is.
Balance: 4/10 X
Not completely symetrical, imba amount of gold in gold mines lets you do whatever you want.
Bug Free: 5/10 √
The amount of random triggers may cause some bugging:
Gold Digger
Events
Time - Every 1200.00 seconds of game time
Conditions
Actions
Wait 1.00 seconds
Unit - Create 1 Flesh Golem for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Center <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Unit - Create 3 Hydralisk for Neutral Hostile at (Random point in Middle <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Wait 1.00 seconds
Unit - Create 1 Ancient Hydra for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Gold Monster 1 <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Unit - Create 1 Ancient Hydra for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Gold Monster 2 <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Unit - Create 1 Ancient Hydra for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Gold Monster 3 <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Unit - Create 1 Ancient Hydra for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Gold Monster 4 <gen>) facing (Center of Center <gen>)
Cinematic - Send transmission to (All players) from Dark Ranger 0118 <gen> named Unknown: Play No sound and display You Willl All Pay!!.... Modify duration: Add 0.00 seconds and Wait
This can mess up the middle creeps.
Terrain: 2/10 X
Very poor terrain, the rivers are done hidious, you need to study this art and improve it. To flat, no shrubery and dodoads.
Scripting: 2/10 X
A lot of unnecesary triggers that make the game bad and strange, such as cheats and the creep creation triggers.
Gameplay/Fun Factor: 2/10 X
The vast amount of creeps in the middle makes it almost imposible, the cheats make it stupid and some of the other triggers just make it even more stupid. I know you wanted to make it fun but it's just not.
Lag: 5/10 √
When I go to middle it lags like hell, because warcraft wasn't made to support that much creeps.
Drops: 1/10 X
Imbalanced amount of drops.
Proper submission and crediting: 2/10 X
Mention that it's made by the author in: Made by. Did you have permission? More info and images.
Conclusion
In overall: 25 / 90
27% minimal 50% not met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall a a very bad map. This is a altered melee that has some unnecesary triggers and no one will enjoy playing this. The item drops are poorly done along with the terrain and balance. You should study map making and try again. I am sorry to tell you but this attempt is a fail.
After I seen that 2nd screenshot, I do not think I want to download at all. Over 30+ hostile unit? WTF ?