Betrayer Part 1

[Moderator]

18:13, 22nd Apr 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Lag_Reviews]

Alright cinematic, Heres a Review P:

Woah alright cinematic for a part one P:

Although I found a few issues with it, their for I am going to give you my thoughts towards it.

My Review:

Pros:

• Good spells/models/voices/fighting
• Alright terrain
• Good voices
• Nice Preview image
• Nice music

Cons:

• Can't close the cinematic at any time (should be able to press escape to close at anytime)
• No credits for the cinematic (Did you make all the models, voices, terrain etc yourself?)
• Doesn't auto close back to the menu to select what map we want to play

Things to improve cinematic:

• Add a loading screen to it (Will make it ten 10 times more enjoyable when loading)
• (In my opinion) Add a better intro storyline (I didn't know why he was randomly fighting the dragon at the start)

Strange things:

• The characters sometimes say different stuff to the text that comes up? (Is this intentional?)

Overall, the cinematic was good to watch, although it wasn't really left open for many different possibilities to leave us pondering over while we wait for part 2. In my opinion part 1 was good, had alright terrain not the best and needs a better storyline to introduce what is going on in this series. As for now all I can sense is that Arthus calls a dragon and Illidan fights it and dies but doesn't die :S (but that only my opinion and totally up to you if you want to improve the story line.)

Overall rating 2.5-3 out of 5 and I would not vote for rejection at this time as it does not list sufficient credits in the cinematic and has a few errors.

Although I enjoyed it but can't approve it,
Lag_Reviews!

PS: Honestly fix the credits, you can't have made all the voices/models/terrains/spells yourself could you?

 

[Narrat0r]

Wasn't this already uploaded?

 

[-Kobas-]

If that was snow terrain why you use Cattail model?

Also put screenshots in to hidden tag!

Improve description!

Give Credits and make that:

Doesn't auto close back to the menu to select what map we want to play
Can't close the cinematic at any time (should be able to press escape to close at anytime)

like Lag said

 

[dexm]

Nice

 

[Narrat0r]

Nice

Attention. n00b post giving 5/5 because he wants rep.

 

[Hawk]

Well this was good and short cinematic,it's strange that you add lots of that "grass" doodad.Why you add lots of those when it's cold out there? And need ESC for exit the cinematic map... I will vote 3/5.

Attention. n00b post giving 5/5 because he wants rep.

Hahaha

 

[Septimus]

1/5 from me.

1) Delete and re-upload map instead of update it.

2) The terrain was poor, empty and bad use of height variation.

3) The battle contain wait syndrome, an ordinary hack and slash with poor animation usage and just another sfx abuse cinematic.

4) Poor camera movement as they're sometimes too fast and choppy. Infact, most of the camera angle was way too low.

5) Mismatch dialog and sound.

 

[Narrat0r]

It isn't rejected yet?

 

[SexYFrostWyrM]

Thats overall a nice cinematic, but something disturbed me : The start point of sapphiron's missiles is very badly placed (the frost missiles comes from his stomach instead of his mouth tt).