Battle Wart

[Riley]

A concept design I drew up...possibly make a model out of it if i get around to making the full concept
Comments/criticism is great!

Thanks,
Riley

 

[Kimbo]

Very nice, good to see new people into art yes yes, the details are fine, but the form/shape is rather..basic.
It looks flat and the blue lighting should also go along the bottom of his lips, this will make it stand out more. Your top light source also seems like its defined in the wrong way, the wrong direction.

EDIT: The blood on the lips is..also too..thick like rubber jelly or something, try to stain the red/blood over his lips then have slight layers of saliva over that.

Apart from that, id like to see more from you.

 

[Riley]

Thanks Werewulf,

Thanks for pointing those details out, ill hopefully get to editing him with a few corrections.

-Riley

 

[Anomines]

Ohh i love the skin...its really well done.
The part where the eye is looks bit to flat and 2 dimensional, but this can be corrected easily
Yeah rest is same as werewulf said