Corruption Loading Screen

[JakeCake]

So this is my first concept till date, I ordered a digitizer a few days ago, so I had to draw something, so I drew this loading screen for my map. I hope you like it, if not, don't be to harsh at me, I started drawing a few days ago for the first time.

Loading Screen

I used the concepts of Matte Painting, and then drew everything over with normal brushes to get a painted look. It's still WIP and I'm going to use at least a few more hours on it.

And by the way, this is of cause a place in my map, It's one of the last boss-battles. The four units standing in the back is the playable characters, and the crystal thing is also important for the story.

oh, and just for fun, here is the original screenshot:

Original

 

[Dark_Angel2147]

can you make a loading screen for my rpg plz? im only like 25% done but yea i need a loading screen if you are i need the loading screen to have these elements:Ice/Water, Fire,Lightning,Earth,Darkness and Light and its called Neptunes Ravenge ill give you credit

 

[JakeCake]

can you make a loading screen for my rpg plz? im only like 25% done but yea i need a loading screen if you are i need the loading screen to have these elements:Ice/Water, Fire,Lightning,Earth,Darkness and Light and its called Neptunes Ravenge ill give you credit

Sorry, that wont happen .. I have no idea who you are or what your working on, I fear that the map might never show up and the loading screen will be lost.

Anyway, I would love to get some feedback now? someone

 

[Dark_Angel2147]

well alright then

 

[JakeCake]

So this is complete crap?

 

[Duruka]

Looks pretty nice, IMO. The demon hunter on the left has a weird smile though. Keep working on it, and I think it will look really good.
That's just my opinion though, and I don't really know much about art.

 

[kola]

ok, dont mixt cartoonish drawings with real photos (it makes the image looks weird).
and i also think that the screenshot u took for it is simply better. sry.

 

[dead-man-walking]

I'm sorry. But those Demon Hunters look gay. Otherwise, nice Loading Screen.