Autumn

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An Autumn sunrise.

Autumn Yellow.jpg
 
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Light isn't good as it should be. Also, the sky is awful IMO. You could add more details to the foreground for more natural feeling.
 
The foreground looks better now IMO, but I still don't like the sky and light.
Sky should be yellowish and the sun itself is weird (especially sun rays).
 
This picture can have good future, when you make some of the changes, cause atm it needs more work.

* Try to use other ground tiles too, cause atm, it looks one-sided.
* I dont like some doodad placements. For exsample the box behind the rock looks bad IMO.
* The ground high look too rapid, it makes grass models look like the are in the air at some point.
* Fogging could be done better. I think it would look good, if you add stronger fog at horizon.

This work can have future, if you continue making it better.
 
Okay, so a list of changes that have been made are;
Sun is a yellowish color
Sky is yellow.
Tile Varriation
Move the box
Smooth height to a more gradual increase
Stronger fog.

Edit: Moved screen shot to first post.
 
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