AsheForest + Sunken Ruins Forestv1.1

[Moderator]

11:44, 8th Jun 2013
Orcnet:

you can just make a thread here at Map Development and do your whole wip there, not uploading it here sorry unfinished map is not allowed so I have to take this down

 

[SeedinAethyr]

I haven't played this yet, but this clearly needs a better description. Give Credits (if necessary), Screenshots (of terrain and cool abilities, if applicable), Story (if applicable), gameplay, and goal.
Next, the game says it was created by Unknown. Fix that. Also change the map's name. Maps with a title of "Just Another Warcraft III Map" are rejectable.
I may give you criticism later.

 

[Stefan121]

Thank you i will fix that

 

[WolfFarkas]

the game doesnt have objetives, i mean what i need to do to win
more than killing mobs with an uncofortable camara
i dont critic the camara, but for me, i dont like, i want free camara always

the only thing i didnt like in war chasers was the camara wasnt free

making a custom map at first is hard, my first map was a custom map survival, and it didnt work good
(where it says didnt work good read rejected),
ask SeedinAethyr what im talking about, because he made the review , oo you are there hi , i am joking,
but dont get bad if is not approved at first one, expanding the game play always helps, you know, abilities, posibilty of choose hero, markets at the begining

edit: a yea fix the title and the author

 

[SeedinAethyr]

Okay Stefan121, I've played your map, AsheForest + Sunken Ruins Forest and I must say, although I applaud your effort in making a third person camera, there isn't much else to the map. This map seems to be trying to be a RPG as well as a melee map at the same time. And as a couple of us have seen in The Glaive (a removed map which supported third person camera and was a melee map at the same time), third person does not go well with melee. Use third person cameras when only playing one unit. Now, I think your terrain work was decent, so I'll give you a couple points for that. Next, the gameplay. As I said earlier, your map seemed to be a RPG and a melee map at the same time. The player must make a base to start creeping, and making bases is hopelessly hard to do with a third person camera. The map obviously focused on your Tauren Chieftain and him gaining levels and items, so that's why I called it a RPG. The game also seemed sort of like a sandbox, just run around the island and creep with no real goal. There was no Quests to outline what I had to do to win. Finally, your description. It says that the map was created by Unknown and that the map's title is Just Another Warcraft III Map. That is unacceptable. Your actual description is also very unappealing. It has no use of BBCodes (although these aren't necessary, they are very attractive), no screenshots, no goal, many grammar errors, and the category of Defense/Survival obviously does not support this map.
I'm very, very sorry but I must vote
Rejection and give the map a
1/5

 

[Stefan121]

the map its not finished
i will update it soon
it would be the quest it would be the human base and others )
ThankYou

 

[Orcnet]

you can just make a thread here at Map Development and do your whole wip there, not uploading it here sorry unfinished map is not allowed so I have to take this down

 

[Stefan121]

The Map its fixed !