Another Offspring terrain!

[<Offspring>]

Aye! My second terrain! Yeah, i know i should finish my first one. But i got into some trouble and wanted to take a break from that one so i made this one
( Yes it's another sunken ruins scene! )

 

[seruk]

Aight you've definatly got potential, but that's hardly not enough dude. The Blizz cliffs for example looks pretty damn bad, and the picture just lacks excitment all together. But you've used your doodads right and all. Keep working on it man.

 

[Belgarath]

Looks quite nice, but try to keep your screens in one thread. Unless it's an awesomely spectacular screen or a lot of them for a certain thing, people get a bit annoyed/confused.

 

[Gilles]

The cliffs are just ugly models, you actually made good use of them! Good job there, but again up close the cliffs are an ugly model. Those snake models look really ugly as well, I suggest replacing them with the other ones in UTM.

 

[Nindira]

Boring. Use a different angel? Maybe fog, rain and lightning. May I recommend capturing this screen somewhere off to the side, somthing like when indiana jones gets the statue on the pedestal?

 

[Belgarath]

1- I don't think everyone's seen indiana jones, for example, I haven't.
2- You do realize this is an ingame screen shot ... ?

 

[Gilles]

I have, I know what he means.

No I didn't realize.

 

[Naze]

Yes, the angle of the camera is a little bad. But it is ok. I think that the edges of the stairs are so tiny to the size of those Naga.

 

[Nudl9]

and the picture just lacks excitment all together

I think its because the nagas are all hidden in all the mass of doodads.
DONT OVERUSE ENVIROMENT MODELS, it looks crappy and if your gonna make grass dont use shrubs, shrubs only fits near rocks or towards things generally (walls, buildings, cliffs, but not on plain ground or in masses!)
Reduce a few and it actually looks pretty nice!

 

[Naze]

well, if you want to mean that is an abandoned area, you can use them. Bcus, no one walks there for years, and the grass is very tall now. But it is better that don't use shrubs in the paths.