Zomg Another First Terrain!

[<Offspring>]

Aye, another first terrain. Tho it's not that much of a terrain more like a scene.

 

[brad.dude03]

Pretty neat stuff

 

[FamousPker49]

Interesting, but I would reccomend adding some fog, going to game view settings, so you do not see the doodad squares, and a little more wildlife.

 

[<Offspring>]

Added some more wildlife and i tried to add some fog but it just disappeared.
And i took a new screen shot in Game view settings, Better now?

 

[seruk]

Looking neat. It actually don't need fog as it is now, but add something eyecatching, like a statue or a diamon or whatever. Right now there's no focus point.

 

[Gilles]

I like it, although some new angles would be nice!

 

[Craka_J]

You can have more than one first terrain? :O

Terrain needs a better fog and the middle of the terrain needs more decoration, but the water should have more variation of doodads. Spamming coral doesn't look so cool.
~Craka_J

 

[madman9800]

Looks pretty cool, and i agree with Craka_J, you should have more variety in the water, however i know its kinda hard to really "decorate" water...

 

[DungeonM]

If this is one of your first terrains you are definetly on your way towards some awesome terrain.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Looks decent, don't have any actuall complaints besides something eye catching would be nice.

 

[<Offspring>]

Something eye catching and some more water doodads ey?
And thanks for the compliments

 

[Nudl9]

I suggest you remove the bubbles, if you ask me it looks bad and where does the bubbles come from? If your not using some kind of mix of waterfall dont use them and ye like the other ppl said add some fog.
Light colored fogs is usually the best ones.

 

[Gilles]

I agree with Nudl9, you should only place a couple of bubbles. Also the seaweed looks bad, I don't like that model, I suggest using a different doodad.

 

[Naze]

Use the Sunken Ruins' lilly pad. Sometimes they look good.You've made a good use of the blizzard's cliffs again. Another thing: Fix some shrubs at the corner of the lake. Viny plants looks good too.

 

[Oziris]

I really like this keep the good work!

 

[<Offspring>]

Sorry for not checking back, Been busy playing guild wars and battlefield .
Made some minor changes, Added lily pads in the water and some "viny" plants at the edges.

 

[Naze]

Dude, add some different ground tiles and elevation. That thing you did ruins the terrain. But it is nice! =]

Keep improving dude!

 

[seruk]

Don't really like the graveyard but the ruins are great.

 

[Craka_J]

• The graveyard is very flat. Add some hills.
• Not only is this a flat graveyard, but I think it is a bit too small to be a graveyard. Though, if this were a playable map you're actually working on, this can be excused.
• You used only one grass tile throughout the entire map. No tile variation is a very, very big no-no in terraining. Can only be excused maybe if it were an indoor terrain such as the interior of a house.
• The fog should be given more depth.
• Surrounding the graveyard with cliffs is a very bad idea. Get rid of it.
• Add a couple flowers in front of some of the grave stones. It'd make it look more formal and give it a sense of purpose.

Overall, I did not like this terrain very much. In almost all aspects, this could be improved. The use of environmental doodads is good, so I'll pass that one off of the list.

Also, next time when you take screenshots of your terrain, do it while in the World Editor! No body likes in-game screenshots unless if it is mod.
~Craka_J

 

[<Offspring>]

Added a new terrain, Happy Xmas

 

[Mor)L(unE]

Doesnt look too bad, although the sunken ruisn tileset could use some fog

 

[Oziris]

The world tree is nothing special.As u say it is good for a video!

 

[Naze]

Veery cool terrain, but I think that grass didn't grow underwater...

 

[<Offspring>]

added 2 new screens of a mountain terrain.

 

[FireMaster]

the 3 and the 4 looks good

 

[Gilles]

A good terrain.

I don't like the rock hill though. A normal hill would have been better probably.

Oh and you need a fog. If you add a fog and improve the hill +rep!

 

[<Offspring>]

A good terrain.

I don't like the rock hill though. A normal hill would have been better probably.

Oh and you need a fog. If you add a fog and improve the hill +rep!

Removed the rocks from the hill!
Added a few Hobbiton screens ( Had nothing to do while making em )

 

[~Void~]

WC3 cliffs are bad, but it really looks nice.

 

[Craka_J]

Some of the objects in your newer terrains, such as the mountain terrain have floating objects. The rocks in this case are the main problem.

There are objects also floating in the indoor terrain, mainly on top of the desk (The golden grail and books) have floating objects. I recommend you fix this, since it has a bad outlook on your terrain in the end.

You're getting better, I think, with terraining, but you just need to learn to fix a lot of mistakes you make as you go along terraining maps.

~Craka_J

 

[seruk]

I'm liking #3, #4 is too bare though, plus it doesn't have any athmosphere, and #5 has them fugly Lordaeron rocks.
The indoor scenes look okay to me, and so does the hobbit-house one terrain-wise anyway. The latter needs some fog I think, or something in the background and/or a better camera angle.

 

[Gilles]

Maybe the rocks were better. Hard to decide.

The last one is great. The little cottage. Reminds me of a hobbit hole slightly.

 

[~Void~]

I think it's really really nice. But I have really strange taste, so you shouldn't take it as a compliment >_>