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Androidv10Upgraded.BLP

Submitted by KnightDavion
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
IMMA KILL YOU

Well the idea to make this skin just popped out of my mind. My inspiration is Yoshimitsu of Tekken.

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Download it if you want but don't distribute w/o my permission.

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Comments and critiques will be taken nicely and I hope to see a great critique to improve this skin.

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Update*
Major modification!

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Update2*
Changed sword, changed beard, addded cracks in the armour, etc.

Keywords:
Star Wars, Jedi, Knight, Star Craft, Bob Marley, I, slept, with, your, MOM
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Androidv9 - Machine Exterminator (Texture)

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15:00, 15th Apr 2011 shiiK: Cleaning up skins that have been rejected (until updated) for more than a month - moving to rejected permanently due lack of updates since last moderation. No new review of the skin has been made. If you feel that this...
  1. 15:00, 15th Apr 2011
    shiiK: Cleaning up skins that have been rejected (until updated) for more than a month - moving to rejected permanently due lack of updates since last moderation. No new review of the skin has been made. If you feel that this decission is wrong, or if you want to update the skin, please reply to this PM and I'll work it out for you. As this is a preset message, and I'm just picking up each and every skin in the category, I want to apologize beforehand if this clutters your inbox.

    13:36, 18th Apr 2010
    Dentothor: Overall, this skin is just far too blurry and it lacks a lot of shading and highlights. To reduce the blurryness, id suggest adding more detail and texture to the skin.

    Dentothor: No changes made, Rejected until updated.
     
  2. Misha

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    needs more work, i think.. it's blurry..

    EDIT: pants and sword are undefined
     
  3. KnightDavion

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    I copied the sword from yoshimitsu's...the green saber-like samurai. The pants is like that I made some lines to make it like linen bt I don't know how. Any other suggestions?
    And I need a good critique.
     
  4. Bernkastel

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    Well.. As for first. The face doesnt look like metal i'd say the sword is very ugly. It needs something cause it's well.. Boring. And the skin itself doesnt look much of an android.
     
  5. Misha

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    Hmm.. Orc Yoshimitsu would be a good idea.. but he would need a LOT of things added.. like all the plating/details on the face, on the arms, on body..

    and as for the sword, I'm afraid that you would have to find another sword, You can't form an energy blade with texture only. at least to my knowledge o_O

    aand as for help.. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/mr-goblins-tutorial-110127/ .. as always :B

    Yoshimitsu :3
    [​IMG]
     
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    he is TOO coulurfull my eyes hurt. His blade is aufull
     
  7. Misha

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    That wasn't so constructive...
     
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    hmmmm, orc blademaster really do have some kind of resemblance to Yoshimitsu!
    why didnt i think of that!
    anyway back on topic, u can make an energy blade out of this one, u just have to make the center of the blade, very highlighted and the edges shadowed,
    face needs more work :/ try making his face skully like Yoshi here
    also remove the green thing on his arms, they look a bit off, or if u dont wanna remove it, add shadows to it, so they will blend with the arm,

    but overall i like the inspiration on making him look like Yoshimitsu, great work!!
    3/5 until i see some changes^^
     
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    Well it doesn't supposed to look like Yoshi, it's just he is my inspiration for doing this. Well got to work on it more like you people said.
     
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    Most of it is decent, I guess. But the sword is absolutely horrible.
     
  11. KnightDavion

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    A major update!!!
     
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    sword looks a lot better now ;D
     
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    sword looks too normal, guess its the lack of details, maybe add some robotic features on the sword,

    but that's just me, BTW, this look a LOT better than the last one, the sword is the only thing that bothers me, 4.5/5^^
     
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    Lookin' better.. :]

    hmm what you might do is to do the blade like you would do normal metal, but then just change the hue to be green, that way you'll get a freehand that is both green energy and good metal. (ofc a lill this or that to make it more like glowy.. but don't overdo it)

    EDIT: I'd alpha out teh ballz :b
    EDIT2: And maybe even a bit of the beard..
     
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    Try to make the metal parts look more like metal. They look very dull at the moment.
    And if you intended the armor to be dull, then add little details like cracks, dirt splotches, stains, maybe some spots of rust, etc.
     
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    i come for the chinese character
     
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    Yea. As Darkmoon said about the metal and also i'd like to say that flag looks pretty ugly, i think you could make it alphaed so it would show TC? :/
     
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    Hmm.. i was thinking more about the blade metal being metal, just with a green tint and highlights..

    the glow makes it odd..
     
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    I like the blade, reminds me of a lightsaber^^