Moderator, when you see this map, don't approve it. BUT WAIT. You shouldn't just crush this kids dreams and reject him either. Please give him a needs update. He's obviously some kid who this is his first map and you should link him to some tutorials to improve his map.
As for the kid, please add more depth to this mission. Its too plain. Its a cool idea you know a bunch of marines going commando but it needs more.