[Aliens vs Predators] v1

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Date: 12:53:31 16-Apr-12
Map Moderator: -Kobas-
Map Status: Rejected 1/5
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Rejection Reasons:
Map has poor or no description!

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Comment: Take dead-man-walking advice.

 

[kingston45]

Crazy Spells especially Lightning and Fire!
http://www.facebook.com/Darkcastlewarcraft3 for more information!

 

[dead-man-walking]

Some directions in improving your presentation:
-Write a more in-depth description-the only thing that I can gather from your description is that the predators are supposed to kill the alien queen. But how? Are all players playing as predators or are there alien players?
-Don't add that "i'm just 14 but i can do many on computer" thing. Completely unnecessary
-Remove those facebook links-they're unnecessary too
-Optionally, add some screenshots

So, yeah. Improve your description first and then maybe your map would have a chance to see the light of the day as an approved map.

 

[kingston45]

Ok,Sir!