Adventures Of The Young Prince 1(CANCELED)

[Moderator]

[2016-04-14]
Rufus:

Rufus Moderation Note Note: Honestly I didn't notice any changes but a slight creep reduction. Since the prince is not level 10 anymore, the first fight can't be won. Chapter two is as simple as chapter 1. You can just run pas all the creeps and kill the archamge in order to win. The archmage doesn't put up much of a fight as he just uses basic attacks. Chapter three is also very simple. I just used all of my forces I had from the beginning to strom the other base, and won without any big problems. All points from my earlier review is attached below, as none of the mare changed. I am a little disappointed. You promised changes, but there was barely any of them. The next time you update this without fixing the things I talk about in this review, this map will be rejected. The english is very poor, which is understandable since it is not your mothertounge. You have been speaking fully understandable english with me, but in this campaign, the english quality is barely understadable. Look it over and see what errors you can find. The first mission is not in a good condition. You don't get any information about why you are in a ruined castle. You don't get any instructions what to do. You just hint that you should kill the captain. The captain is a very unitersting fight as your character have no special abilities. it is just to stand and attack. Your character also starts at level 10, so you don't even get experience from killing units. You didn't get ant instructions after killing the captain. The camp in the south was there for no reason. I'm not sure you tested this yourself before uploading, as the mission cannot even be done if you don't decide to run past the creeps, as they deal to much damage and you have too little health in the long run. This campaign is unacceptable in its current state, since there are a lot of things that need to improve before it can become approvable. Status set to Awaiting Update. One more update without significant improvements will caase this map to be rejected. Next Review The first update of this map after [2016-05-01], will be reviewed again. Any updates before that will return the map to the Awaiting Update status. Explaination This is to prevent authors from making minor updates, forcing reviewers to check them out again too soon. During this time, try not only to fix all issues I have mentioned in me review above, but try to see for yourself what can be improved. Extended Waiting Time If all things mentioned above have not been fixed by the time I review this a second time, the map will get a longer waiting time. Rejection If your map have already gone through an extended waiting time, and all things mentioned are still not fixed, the map will be rejected.​

23:49, 6th Apr 2016
Rufus:

Rufus Moderation Note Note: Read this carefully and know that I am only trying to help you by telling you this. You are rushing maps and do not finish them. Instead you start working on another one. You need to focus on one of your maps, instead of uploading a new one when you change the concept slightly. You shouldn't work like this in the long run as you upload resources you might never finish. For now, work on one of your already uploaded resources, recieve feedback, look them over yourself, and fix as many things as you can. I am going to set all your maps to Awaiting Update as I have checked them and noted that they are all in need of updates. Select one of them and work hard with that one. As soon as that one gets approved, you can contine develop the other maps. It is better to have one good map instead of many unfinished and unrefined maps. If you update them too many times without fixing all the issues I mentioned about it, I will have to Reject it. About this campaign You need to check the intro cinematic. There are way too long pauses and the duration of the second message is very short. The entire first intro is actually not needed, since it was not much text and no cinematic, you could just add that text as a message displaying in the beginning of your first mission. The english is very poor, which is understandable since it is not your mothertounge. You have been speaking fully understandable english with me, but in this campaign, the english quality is barely understadable. Look it over and see what errors you can find. The first mission is not in a good condition. You don't get any information about why you are in a ruined castle. You don't get any instructions what to do. You just hint that you should kill the captain. The captain is a very unitersting fight as your character have no special abilities. it is just to stand and attack. Your character also starts at level 10, so you don't even get experience from killing units. You didn't get ant instructions after killing the captain. The camp in the south was there for no reason. I'm not sure you tested this yourself before uploading, as the mission cannot even be done if you don't decide to run past the creeps, as they deal to much damage and you have too little health in the long run. This campaign is unacceptable in its current state, since there are a lot of things that need to improve before it can become approvable.

 

[Supernickman 32]

Comment!

 

[Rufus]

Rufus Moderation Note Note: Read this carefully and know that I am only trying to help you by telling you this. You are rushing maps and do not finish them. Instead you start working on another one. You need to focus on one of your maps, instead of uploading a new one when you change the concept slightly. You shouldn't work like this in the long run as you upload resources you might never finish. For now, work on one of your already uploaded resources, recieve feedback, look them over yourself, and fix as many things as you can. I am going to set all your maps I have played so far to Awaiting Update. Select one of them and work hard with that one. As soon as that one gets approved, you can contine develop the other maps. It is better to have one good map instead of many unfinished and unrefined maps. If you update them too many times without fixing all the issues I mentioned about it, I will have to Reject it. About this campaign You need to check the intro cinematic. There are way too long pauses and the duration of the second message is very short. The entire first intro is actually not needed, since it was not much text and no cinematic, you could just add that text as a message displaying in the beginning of your first mission. The english is very poor, which is understandable since it is not your mothertounge. You have been speaking fully understandable english with me, but in this campaign, the english quality is barely understadable. Look it over and see what errors you can find. The first mission is not in a good condition. You don't get any information about why you are in a ruined castle. You don't get any instructions what to do. You just hint that you should kill the captain. The captain is a very unitersting fight as your character have no special abilities. it is just to stand and attack. Your character also starts at level 10, so you don't even get experience from killing units. You didn't get ant instructions after killing the captain. The camp in the south was there for no reason. I'm not sure you tested this yourself before uploading, as the mission cannot even be done if you don't decide to run past the creeps, as they deal to much damage and you have too little health in the long run. This campaign is unacceptable in its current state, since there are a lot of things that need to improve before it can become approvable.

 

[Supernickman 32]

Okay!

Rufus Moderation Note Note: Read this carefully and know that I am only trying to help you by telling you this. You are rushing maps and do not finish them. Instead you start working on another one. You need to focus on one of your maps, instead of uploading a new one when you change the concept slightly. You shouldn't work like this in the long run as you upload resources you might never finish. For now, work on one of your already uploaded resources, recieve feedback, look them over yourself, and fix as many things as you can. I am going to set all your maps I have played so far to Awaiting Update. Select one of them and work hard with that one. As soon as that one gets approved, you can contine develop the other maps. It is better to have one good map instead of many unfinished and unrefined maps. If you update them too many times without fixing all the issues I mentioned about it, I will have to Reject it. About this campaign You need to check the intro cinematic. There are way too long pauses and the duration of the second message is very short. The entire first intro is actually not needed, since it was not much text and no cinematic, you could just add that text as a message displaying in the beginning of your first mission. The english is very poor, which is understandable since it is not your mothertounge. You have been speaking fully understandable english with me, but in this campaign, the english quality is barely understadable. Look it over and see what errors you can find. The first mission is not in a good condition. You don't get any information about why you are in a ruined castle. You don't get any instructions what to do. You just hint that you should kill the captain. The captain is a very unitersting fight as your character have no special abilities. it is just to stand and attack. Your character also starts at level 10, so you don't even get experience from killing units. You didn't get ant instructions after killing the captain. The camp in the south was there for no reason. I'm not sure you tested this yourself before uploading, as the mission cannot even be done if you don't decide to run past the creeps, as they deal to much damage and you have too little health in the long run. This campaign is unacceptable in its current state, since there are a lot of things that need to improve before it can become approvable.

Yeah English not my mothertounge my mothertounge is Latvian but i'll try to fix my campaign!

Don't double post.
You can include both of the previous message in the same post.

Unfortunately, I can't try it out so quickly again as it would unfair that I would prioritize your map just because we are friends. I need to check out other maps that have waited longer for a review. Hopefully this will happen faster and faster though, as we are beginning to clear up the pending section.

Did you fix all the issues I told you about?

Well most of them however i know you need review all pending maps or most so i will wait until you have time!

 

[Rufus]

Don't double post.
You can include both of the previous message in the same post.

Unfortunately, I can't try it out so quickly again as it would unfair that I would prioritize your map just because we are friends. I need to check out other maps that have waited longer for a review. Hopefully this will happen faster and faster though, as we are beginning to clear up the pending section.

Did you fix all the issues I told you about?

 

[Rufus]

Well most of them however i know you need review all pending maps or most so i will wait until you have time!

Well, all issues needs to be fixed.
Status set back to Awaiting Update until they are.

 

[Rufus]

Rufus Moderation Note Note: Honestly I didn't notice any changes but a slight creep reduction. Since the prince is not level 10 anymore, the first fight can't be won. Chapter two is as simple as chapter 1. You can just run pas all the creeps and kill the archamge in order to win. The archmage doesn't put up much of a fight as he just uses basic attacks. Chapter three is also very simple. I just used all of my forces I had from the beginning to strom the other base, and won without any big problems. All points from my earlier review is attached below, as none of the mare changed. I am a little disappointed. You promised changes, but there was barely any of them. The next time you update this without fixing the things I talk about in this review, this map will be rejected. You need to check the intro cinematic. There are way too long pauses and the duration of the second message is very short. The entire first intro is actually not needed, since it was not much text and no cinematic, you could just add that text as a message displaying in the beginning of your first mission. The english is very poor, which is understandable since it is not your mothertounge. You have been speaking fully understandable english with me, but in this campaign, the english quality is barely understadable. Look it over and see what errors you can find. The first mission is not in a good condition. You don't get any information about why you are in a ruined castle. You don't get any instructions what to do. You just hint that you should kill the captain. The captain is a very unitersting fight as your character have no special abilities. it is just to stand and attack. Your character also starts at level 10, so you don't even get experience from killing units. You didn't get ant instructions after killing the captain. The camp in the south was there for no reason. I'm not sure you tested this yourself before uploading, as the mission cannot even be done if you don't decide to run past the creeps, as they deal to much damage and you have too little health in the long run. This campaign is unacceptable in its current state, since there are a lot of things that need to improve before it can become approvable. Status set to Awaiting Update. One more update without significant improvements will caase this map to be rejected. Next Review The first update of this map after [2016-05-01], will be reviewed again. Any updates before that will return the map to the Awaiting Update status. Explaination This is to prevent authors from making minor updates, forcing reviewers to check them out again too soon. During this time, try not only to fix all issues I have mentioned in me review above, but try to see for yourself what can be improved. Extended Waiting Time If all things mentioned above have not been fixed by the time I review this a second time, the map will get a longer waiting time. Rejection If your map have already gone through an extended waiting time, and all things mentioned are still not fixed, the map will be rejected.​

 

[Gottfried]

I played this and uuuh...

It will be a short review:
In the beginning, we saw Prince John, in his full muscular-blonde appearance.
We know that John lives in Azeroth? But where? How he went to prison? Who is the Captain? Who is the Bones?
The first mission is only requires one minute. You just run through the map and receive no damage. :/ Terrain there is quite simply and amateur.
In Second Mission, we received some new charcater. Alfred the Dwarf, the Dark Wizard and some riflemen (or rifledwarves).
Alfred and Prince John made a deal about partnership and killing a wizard as we can saw from the first scene. Voices here really not needed as Alfred should have a custom model and icon.
BTNPaladinSage
RiflemanElite
They should be units (with neutral team color) instead of heroes, as they have no abilities.
In this scenario, I fight with the trolls now, they dropped nothing... the dark wizard is an easy opponent and the towers is easily defeated by the rifledwarves.
Interlude is empty and useless...
Lieutenant should have a custom model too... see this: Stromgarde Footman
4th map is challenging... I mean it is a substandard melee map. You just have to cut trees, mine gold and train units to deal with the Lieutenant's base. I completed this. In the end, the last epilogue dialog is too short-paced to read it. :/
JUDGEMENT: Remade this please!

 

[Supernickman 32]

I played this and uuuh...

It will be a short review:
In the beginning, we saw Prince John, in his full muscular-blonde appearance.
We know that John lives in Azeroth? But where? How he went to prison? Who is the Captain? Who is the Bones?
The first mission is only requires one minute. You just run through the map and receive no damage. :/ Terrain there is quite simply and amateur.
In Second Mission, we received some new charcater. Alfred the Dwarf, the Dark Wizard and some riflemen (or rifledwarves).
Alfred and Prince John made a deal about partnership and killing a wizard as we can saw from the first scene. Voices here really not needed as Alfred should have a custom model and icon.
BTNPaladinSage
RiflemanElite
They should be units (with neutral team color) instead of heroes, as they have no abilities.
In this scenario, I fight with the trolls now, they dropped nothing... the dark wizard is an easy opponent and the towers is easily defeated by the rifledwarves.
Interlude is empty and useless...
Lieutenant should have a custom model too... see this: Stromgarde Footman
4th map is challenging... I mean it is a substandard melee map. You just have to cut trees, mine gold and train units to deal with the Lieutenant's base. I completed this. In the end, the last epilogue dialog is too short-paced to read it. :/
JUDGEMENT: Remade this please!

Thanks for review Gottfried, but currently i'm not able to edit campaign, because i have problems with campaign editor.
About import models, i tried to make Adventures of young prince 1 without import models.
Captain of bones mean like hes captain of puny soldiers that is easy to kill.
Actually Azeroth mean Kingdom of Azeroth from first Warcraft, we know as Stormwind.

And about how John he went in prison, because his family was over throned. So he was placed in prison.
All bugs showed in your review i fixed, as i said i have problems with campaign editor, so all bug fixes don't show.
In future i hope to fix all problems.

 

[Gottfried]

Just do not give up! Without import models, you have a very limited choice of models, but you know.

 

[Supernickman 32]

Just do not give up! Without import models, you have a very limited choice of models, but you know.

I don't give up.

 

[Gottfried]

I also recommend you to read some tutorials.

 

[Supernickman 32]

I also recommend you to read some tutorials.

I've already done that, i'm currently work on my melee map approval maybe you could check out it too (if you want).

Kingdom Of Snow

 

[Gottfried]

maybe you could check out it too (if you want).

I saw the overhead map a moment ago. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/the-ultimate-beginners-terrain-tutorial.35233 Read this, I also will read this.

 

[Supernickman 32]

I saw the overhead map a moment ago. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/the-ultimate-beginners-terrain-tutorial.35233 Read this, I also will read this.

My terrain not so bad. But i will check out.

 

[Gottfried]

My terrain not so bad

Hmm....hmmm... well.... uhm....