A Warriors Training

[Moderator]

ap0: Rejected

15:37, 26th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+]

Neutral Point

[!] Kinda plain and normal cinematic

Bad Point

[-]

Overall - 3/5
Approve

 

[shaun]

yeah it was pretty much better than the other maps you uploaded
the terrain still needs improvement and it s obvious that you did not spend much time on placing doodads and tiles
but it's still much better than the former one

n i agree with the mod; there are no markable bad points n nothing extraordinary good

just a neutral cinematic

work on if you want - i'm watching every cinematic on hoveworkshop

 

[rasha]

u shoud improve terain and put your hearth in the map but idea is good and i give you hmmmm 7/10. continue with good job

 

[macksen]

Thanks ^^ Map updated, test and see what u think of the terrain now..
What you thinking of making a part 2 of this map?

 

[lord_ken]

Ok i'll tell you what i think of it after i download. oh and BTW make sure you reduce the file size so that some people can download faster Good points None Neutral points I'd agree on septimus and Shaun its a neutral cinematic Bad points None

 

[TomiTomo]

Good storyline, but its quite repeating as i can see the mom and dad go to armory and go training 2 times. maybe i can suggest part 2 ? i think this can be a good cinematic ^^ make part 2 !! i will help you if you want me to