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A Warriors Training

Submitted by macksen
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is a story..
Watch and see what u think..
Then please say to me if u want me to make a part 2...
The first part (this), it's no action...
Thanks to communist_orc for the model: Dummy
Thanks to Nasrudin for the model: ElveswoodDP2
Thanks to alreadyused for the model: Bed



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A Warriors Training (Map)

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ap0: Rejected 15:37, 26th Jun 2008 Septimus: Good Point [+] Neutral Point [!] Kinda plain and normal cinematic Bad Point [-] Overall - 3/5 Approve
  1. ap0: Rejected

    15:37, 26th Jun 2008
    Septimus:

    Good Point

    [+]

    Neutral Point

    [!] Kinda plain and normal cinematic

    Bad Point

    [-]

    Overall - 3/5
    Approve
     
  2. shaun

    shaun

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    yeah it was pretty much better than the other maps you uploaded
    the terrain still needs improvement and it s obvious that you did not spend much time on placing doodads and tiles
    but it's still much better than the former one

    n i agree with the mod; there are no markable bad points n nothing extraordinary good

    just a neutral cinematic

    work on if you want - i'm watching every cinematic on hoveworkshop :p
     
  3. rasha

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    u shoud improve terain and put your hearth in the map but idea is good and i give you hmmmm 7/10. continue with good job
     
  4. macksen

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    Thanks ^^ Map updated, test and see what u think of the terrain now..
    What you thinking of making a part 2 of this map?
     
    Last edited: Jun 26, 2008
  5. lord_ken

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    Ok i'll tell you what i think of it after i download. oh and BTW make sure you reduce the file size so that some people can download faster Good points None Neutral points I'd agree on septimus and Shaun its a neutral cinematic Bad points None
     
    Last edited: Jun 27, 2008
  6. TomiTomo

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    Good storyline, but its quite repeating as i can see the mom and dad go to armory and go training 2 times. maybe i can suggest part 2 ? i think this can be a good cinematic ^^ make part 2 !! i will help you if you want me to