A Camp near a river [remade]

[Lancer1111]

This are some pics of my remade of this pictures (click here). Hope you like it( i made the pics out of 4 different camera angles cause i can't decide which looks best).

EDIT: And yes, i didn't get any better rock-modell...

 

[Lord Hamsterbacke]

is the house a complete modell or is it build from some other modells ? cause it looks very nice, please make a cinematic out of it

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Don't doublepost.

 

[Wolfhelm]

Big improvment this really looks much better then befor.
You should adjust the terrain hights more, like make the path sunk into ground a bit and raise ground around the house and maybe make the rest bumby. More fog too and lighting.

 

[~Void~]

Don't doublepost.

He didn't. There was a GI'd user posting between them, you just can't see it.

 

[Lancer1111]

Why can I see Lord Hamsterbackes post and he not ???

EDIT: And what is a GI'd user ?

 

[Just_Spectating]

Looks like a fun game terrain if it was a game.

 

[Belgarath]

Don't doublepost.

Don't post useless as fuck comments that have pretty much NOTHING to do with the thread, I suppose?

As a map terrain, good, as a terrain terrain, average. You need a better tileset, try village, instead of LordS. Also, your environment's lacking - try adding shrubs & flowers to make it a bit more colourful. The sky's good, just try adding a thicker, ie. better fog.

 

[Wraithwynd]

Don't use rain in screen shots. Rain never looks like rain it looks like streaks of 'stuff'

Add a wee bit of fog. Say a starting z of 1000 and an ending Z of 9000 a very light gray (near white) just give a slight hint of atmospheric haze.

If you really want to have rain, then you need a stormy looking sky.

Camera ground shots. Always raise the height ( Z offset) this is relatively easy to do with a camera object. While you are at it set the far z to 10000

If this is a game, then give us in game shots - I seriously doubt you will have all of those neat angles and rotations inside of the game.

Maps looks different as games then as terrain pretty pictures. More so if you are using fog of war/black mask.

 

[akblabla]

Cool but what about making the water a bit more yellow(it neutralize the over blue water) and if you want to make a rainy map, try to use dalaron ruins.

 

[Cyper95]

much better than other one but i wouldn't call it a camp though

 

[Redalert2maker]

Could use more doodads specialy on the third screen maybe put som animals on it and a dog. Anyway looks nice

 

[Lancer1111]

But how to call it then ? A little House with two persons and a field of melons in front and with trees around ? This would describe the whole picture, or ?

 

[akblabla]

But how to call it then ? A little House with two persons and a field of melons in front and with trees around ? This would describe the whole picture, or ?

Maybe "House near River" or "Farm near River".

 

[creyzi4zb12]

Wow!! This actual post made me think of coming back to working of wc3 world editor!! +rep!! There's something about the terrain that has a good feel to terrainers like me.

 

[Lancer1111]

"Back to the roots" - How it says in an Add-On for "Die Gilde 2". Thanks to all for their comments/criticism.

 

[FrIkY]

Well, it looks good, but it needs different tiles, especially in the forest, there should be some grass tile.

 

[Lancer1111]

The last time I've imported tiles my map file was broken and a work of 3 months was away... maybe I shouldn't use the normal WE.