(2)Tirisfal Glade

[Moderator]

00:16, 11th Aug 2013
Orcnet: lacking map description and sonofjay's review

 

[CroMoX]

Btw this is actually a melee, as long as you havent changed units. If you have imported or changed doodads its still a melee map.

I know WE says different but thats how it's classified. Also screenies are always nice. I would check but im on my phone. So I will check tomorrow morning (for me)

 

[Twilight]

Some Screenshots will be nice, description needs some work, but good template/terrain can be Improved
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Rating
-3/5
Stuff to fix
-Description
Stuff to use
-Map Description Generator

 

[~DARK~]

ScreenShots

Here are some screenshots from my map

entire View : http://www.8pic.ir/images/63895758760705195473.png

Traven Place : http://www.8pic.ir/images/28885006624139568024.png

Outside : http://www.8pic.ir/images/21114866226582457986.png

I'm waiting for your ideas

 

[Twilight]

Good but use code on image to put them on description

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

let me tell you something about this map


it is ok

 

[~DARK~]

Thanks All of you i waiting for approving

 

[Twilight]

Map is good, but the description needs the screenshot, anyway I am changing my rate to 4/5

 

[sonofjay]

Well let me review this one for you.

The map layout is symmetric and also look nice with lots of routes to go around though I will prefer if there are cliffs blocking behind the trees on the routes since trees can be cut down and (If someone clever enough) cut down the trees then that will leave the whole center field wide open.

Terrain design.. well I do not approve of your weird use of the man-cliff with ground tiles since they don't blend each and just not realistic looking and they're just together. I give you credit for trying to blend different trees together, might have work for other trees but to see trees, that usually can be seen on different season, together is just ridiculous. Also your designing is kinda inconsistent, there are places which looks good(those small ponds with ruined tower) I even like that you put some efforts on decorating the creep camps but some places is just empty like the player's base and some paths. Also you kinda spammed some rocks, flowers and other organic doodad on weird places(like on bricked tiles that is just unnatural).

Lastly, you might want to improve the creep drops, currently the creep drops is just ridiculously weak. Also add fog.

Anyway, this might be good to anyone but it just get 2/5 from me. I like that you tried to make something unique but the execution is really lacking.

 

[~DARK~]

Thanks for you review i will do my best sir ,

 

[Orcnet]

I'd go with sonofjay's review also the map is not Altered Melee, its still a melee.

 

[~DARK~]

why it's become rejected , i also done anything in my Level , im not Sonofjay :| i can do my best like this

 

[Vinz]

Approval does not depend on the maker's skill. It depends if it is acceptable to the Hive's standards as a resource.