Name: Arzor
Age: 25
Race: Demon
Class: Demon warrior.
Description: Two long,curved fangs coming from the top of his mouth. Dark red skin, short pointed tail, razor sharp claws. Blue eyes. Human-like shape.
Inventory: Does not use weapons,or carry any items. Fights instead with his teeth,tail,claws,and brute strength.
House number: 33
Health Percentage: 60
Mana Percentage: 40
Biography: Arzor was once part of the doom legion. He,more than anyone else in the legion,craved bloodshed and massacre. Arzor,sensing that if the doom legion continued in their path, decided to leave the doom legion and stand against it, as he fears if he doesn't,there will no longer be any killing or massacres. A terrifying and powerful warrior in combat, he is not one to be taken lightly.
Jordon, i still say you could improve on your RP intro page. It's alright now,but you should really consider giving a better description of the creatures in the doom legion(what they look like,preferred weapons,reason for attacking, etc.). Overall it's gettin there though,hope this character helps convince others to join!
