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19:49, 10th Jan 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected
ap0calypse: Rejected
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SynopsisTwo female students wealthy, popular Cindy and poor dweller Angela accuse John Galt, of rape.
Gendre: | Thriller |
Duration: | 5 minutes |
Plot type: | Extensive plot twists |
Creator: | leventopoulo |
GreditsAT&T LABS (TTS voices),The Godfather Soundtrack (Music),Find Sounds.com(Sound Effects).
Well a few things i have to say about that:
-Story is kind of switching alot^^; so its good but not to special
-The voices where a good idea, but sometimes the emotions are missing
-you should add a trigger that alows the watcher to quit the cinematic(like Esc)
All in all i liked it
Actually, deleting it still breaks the rules if you upload it again, so fail.
How can you just ignore the fact that you break the rules -_-
It is rule violation to multi-upload.
Use the Update button to make updates!
Different name? I don't think so, the others were called "Wild Things" (exactly like that), if you think adding "(Better!)" makes the name different, you're wrong.Actually it is different! It is not the same as before!... Plus the name is different! it is 2 minutes longer then before....:/
O, you didn't upload it again? What's this? An "Update"?I didnt upload it again!! i drastically improved it! :/
qft.Actually, deleting it still breaks the rules if you upload it again, so fail.
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Use the Update button to make updates!
You are breaking the rules...
Different name? I don't think so, the others were called "Wild Things" (exactly like that), if you think adding "(Better!)" makes the name different, you're wrong.
That's like saying "MyMap V1.00" has a different name than "MyMap V2.00".
O, you didn't upload it again? What's this? An "Update"?
qft.
And if you cannot use the update-button, that means I don't want you to update it (I know, I'm not the easiest guy around).
I have rated this according to importance.
Obviously, triggers don't really matter a lot if the story and terrain are absolutely brilliant.
Triggers: very bad: waits instead of timers, leaks, inefficient. (1/5)
Terrain: blizzard cliffs for walls, do I have to say more? (2/15)
Story: I couldn't really tell what kind of story it was supposed to be, half of the cinematic existed out of "X minutes later", some plot changes were pretty predictable (John Galt's dead for example), the entire plot looked like some kind of cheap detective show with a few flaws (4/20)
Use of imports: TTS doesn't have emotions... not good, only the judge's voice was avarage for the first few words, the sound effects weren't bad though. (3/10)
Atmosphere (camera, filters, typo's, ...): the camera was very static, there was no good transition between camera movements (if the camera was moving), most of the time the camera movement existed out of 1 camera going to the other and back again.
There were a lot of annoying grammatical mistakes, especially the overdone comma, which you placed when it was absolutely not necessary.
The dream filter did fit in with the plot (2/10)
Total: 12/60 = 1/5 (20%)
And I've been pretty nice now...
No, re-uploading is a very rare case (when someone quits warcraft 3 and someone else takes over his project for example, the one who quit warcraft can't update it, so the one who received the project can re-upload the map, so he can update it).I said PLUS i used a different name. Ok scrach that But it is different! And i anyway deleted the other maps!!! I didnt know that when a map gets rejected then you must update it! I thought you must re upload it!
Yes, but multi-uploading actually means "uploading multiple versions of the map", it doesn't matter if it's completely different or not, you have to update it, not re-upload.Its very different my other versions!
OK about the triggers. I am not a pro in World Editor!
about the Terrain. I didnt want to use inported terrain!
about the Story! Well you need to understand that Wild things is a movie! its not easy making it into warcraft 3 cinematic! (4/20) Is highly under-rated!
about the Use of imports. Thanks for the sound effects! But really, i dont have a microphone! atleast i had sounds!
about the Atmosphere (camera, filters, typo's, ...). You are right about the camera. You are right about the grammatical mistakes (but not so many). The komas were there because the TTS didnt sound good with out them!
No, really... I'm not being aggressive to you, you haven't seen any of my evil comments yetReally i dont understand why are you so aggressive with me!
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Come on! dont you think thats under-rated?? you are so evil !! lol
I would give you the advise to create a project that is extremely difficult...What if i say to you. That i plan a update??? Do you think thats a good idea?