The cinematic, as it stands, is very simple. We don't even know what exactly happened. What exactly happened to Pudge? Why would someone want to hurt him? What's going to happen to the orc warrior? I think it'd be nice if there was some kind of punchline to your cinematic. Right now, it feels like a video paused right where it was starting to get interesting. Go on, expand your project, make your work count!
Edit: The map hasn't unfortunately been updated for months and at the time of me writing this, is still a substandard cinematic. Do remind me to do a rereview your work once you updated the map, though.