Super Heroes At War v1

Moderator · Jan 26, 2012

Vengeancekael: Private Message
Date: 2012/Jan/28 11:55:31

Reasons:
Poor and lacking terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Your map contains ripped-off models from other games, which is against the rules.
The disabled versions of custom icons are not imported.

Other:
Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials
Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section
Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone
Comment: -Kobas-'s comment included:

First of all terrain is really bad.
I should be recreated, maybe even completely, find terrainer and delete all terrain related imported resources, there is no need for so many special effect like doodads.
If you want to use ice and fire then find better way

Spells are good, but they can be improved, for example Sasuke ultimate look really strange, like I suggested at least attach unit as effect to it

Multiboard and basic systems like item recipes, creep spawning is ok.

Some icons miss DIS form (green icons ingame).

Buildings and creeps look terrible: Use humans and towers at both sides, one side can be elf like so use captain and such units for them. Or change them to something else, it's up to you. But don't mix few races

Remove Do Nothing from your triggers.

Well I tested it and I gotta be honest, it really isn't that good, Kobas almost covered everything I was going to say, except for, TENTACLE TOWERS FIRING TENTACLES?! D:
Also ripped-off models are not allowed, sorry :S
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Gen Bloodhorn · Jan 26, 2012

gives me a taste of dota

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

funny, because firstly i wanted to make it taste like my dick...but i think you have good taste over the map

Wazzz · Jan 26, 2012

looks like dota with airbender

i hope you have permission from icefrog

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

its not dota with airbender ... there are heroes like harry potter , altair (from assassins creed ) and so on ... that means i should get aproval from ubisoft or what ? ... its for fun purpose only

Wazzz · Jan 26, 2012

these signs:
'© ®'
indicate that it's of your own creation

the hive does not want to have legal issues when your 'own creation' isn't legal

you do realise that a map like this with signs indicating copyright can get the hive sued, don't you?

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

so should i remove them ?

HFR · Jan 26, 2012

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

ok i do it now , btw guys plz offer some constructive feedback also ..

Wazzz · Jan 26, 2012

i think we've covered that it's not a highly original idea already, and if not it's probably due to the assumption that it's not really required

let's be honest here, there's a lot of dota rip-offs where they have new heroes and recipes instead of the old ones, and maybe they have a new system that tells you the time while you play

it all ends up being the same, and it gets repetitive very quickly

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

better test it ... and then tell me its dota-clone because this map is a very fast paced aos instead of a farming creeping waiting for late dota ... no offence

Wazzz · Jan 26, 2012

that doesn't make the idea original at all

this is why i don't bother with dota rip-offs

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

ok ok as you want anyways few minutes until i update this version ...

Allright... I have replaced the copyright thing ... so enjoy ...

-Kobas- · Jan 26, 2012

First of all terrain is really bad.
I should be recreated, maybe even completely, find terrainer and delete all terrain related imported resources, there is no need for so many special effect like doodads.
If you want to use ice and fire then find better way

Spells are good, but they can be improved, for example Sasuke ultimate look really strange, like I suggested at least attach unit as effect to it

Multiboard and basic systems like item recipes, creep spawning is ok.

Some icons miss DIS form (green icons ingame).

Buildings and creeps look terrible: Use humans and towers at both sides, one side can be elf like so use captain and such units for them. Or change them to something else, it's up to you. But don't mix few races

Remove Do Nothing from your triggers.

switchtotems · Jan 26, 2012

ok speaking about the terrain i really dont know if i can do a thing about it cuz im not a good terrainer and i know only one guy wich quited map making his name ImbaPiranha ( Fall of the Horde ) ... so i dont know wich one can help me ... speaking about the spells ill try to change the things you were speaking off ... the towers ill try to use the scout towers and arrow projectile art ... btw creeps change every 520 seconds ... so none of the tower models will really fit with the towers but ill try to change thanks for the feedback...

Vengeancekael · Jan 28, 2012

Well I tested it and I gotta be honest, it really isn't that good, Kobas almost covered everything I was going to say, except for, TENTACLE TOWERS FIRING TENTACLES?! D:
Also ripped-off models are not allowed, sorry :S

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