15 November 2015
BPower: Rejecting due to the status of this resource being "needs fix" for years.

12:15, 20th Feb 2010
TriggerHappy:

Don't use custom value, and you leak a few locations.

I saw the trigger, doesn't even look like a spell. But please post code for the people who don't wanna download this and post what the spell does.. For me 1/5 the code imo is bad.

Garra said:

this is a naruto spell, so if you don't like naruto please do not download or comment, you will be reported for bias comments against naruto.

the spell torments the minds of foes, casting the illusion that you have dispersed in to a swarm of crow. you can not be attacked or targeted while under this effect

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I'm going to be dead honest.
I didn't even look at your spell.
But I can tell by the lack of proper documentation, lack of attention to rules, and even your spelling, that this spell isn't worth anyone's time.

If you can't follow a couple of standards, then don't bother adding to the spells section as it will just get your spells deleted.

Oh and for your information:
I like naruto.
And it's spelt biased not bias.

And none of these comments are biased. You just forgot to check the rules before you checked the "I agree" box.

Edit: I downloaded the map to give you a second chance and regretted it.

Triggers leak like crazy. One even runs every second of the game wasting resources.

So I'm rating this:
1/5
Because:
This lacks documentation.
It leaks.
Why not just use divine shield with a custom model?
Oh and it doesn't work.
I used 1 clone to attack the unit who had this ability activated... And he attacked AND damaged him.

Vote for Rejection as well.

Guys chill a bit, it is his first spell, show some constructive criticizm please...

Now let me point something out:

• Set removeloc = ((Position of (Casting unit)) offset by 50.00 towards (Facing of (Casting unit)) degrees)

This leaks 1 location. The Position of Casting Unit leaks, therefore you should make it like this:

• Set removeloc = *some loc* offset by x towards y degrees

Also you should learn to use hashtables/indexing in order to make it MUI.

• Set waitcount = (waitcount + 1)

This will crash the WC once the waitcount becomes larger than 8191.
As i said refer to some tutorials about indexing/hashtables.

Also the idea is pretty generic, i would suggest adding some more stuff to the base idea, though i liked the eyecandy of the crows. Also you should never have an ability that creates another hero(there are reasons why).

Furthermore i would advise you to look the leak tutorial again if you already have to understand why Polar Projection and Point with offset leaks.

Hope this helps you and i hope you improve the spell to the point of the spell being acceptable.

EDIT:

I suggest you to improve the test map as it also influences the feel when you cast a spell, some trees and some terrain variation couldn't hurt.
Also rename the map name to something other than naruto(genjutsu.w3x for example)

not that i dont like naruto but what gives you the rights to tell us that we should not download or comment if people dont like naruto? is their a law in which it is stated?

Oo!!! Itachi spell!!! Plz fix! Id love to use in my campaign!!!

Its easy to make those abilities try to make it so they have more crows like;
Locust Swarm> Units > Crow(Color 0 0 0 ) > Damage --Any-- >Speed 522 with trigger
Event - Unit begins casting ability
Condition- Abilty being cast equal to (Name)
Action- Create 1 --invisibility item-- and give it to (Name)
Action- Wait --Duration of ability--
Action- Remove item of type --invisibilty item-- from (Name)
i did it and it works perfectly you might want to change the item to an invisible ability like Attribute Bonus