12:28, 9th Jan 2010
enjoy: Do as suggested by the users. Also, show WIP. Right now, it looks very very cartoonish..

enjoy: Looks delicious enough?

Looks too flat.

not another burger .

the shading has to be redone, the roll looks flat right now. Cheese could need a yellower color, its not really different to the roll. And many things are lacking a texture, improve them.

I agree with Pandas and i don't like the background:S

Better now?

Sorry Vengeancekael, I am very fond of the background

Edit: Heres the unrezied pic, pllz tell me how to improve it, like u will see, I haven't come very far, but I will be better

looks really good in full pic, but not when you resize it
make the sesames clearer

I dont think the Moderators will approve Photoshop standard Shading Options. First of all, because the shading is to small, adding just a little white line on the icon itself. Secondly, it misshapes the burger. The upper half of the roll is a hemisphere, meaning it has much shading on the upper side and none on the lower side.
Another bad point is your resizing Algorithm. The Icon invites you to count pixels. Try another interpolation when you are scaling down the big Pic.

I rezied it in an other way now, so it looks a bit better...

I haven't learnd to shade in an other way yet, so this is what I can do for now.

Thanks for the critique!

Mirroring half of the burguer wasn't the best choice.

You still need to fix the perspective and the shape because making it have a front view making the burger look flat isn't good.

HappyCockroach said:

Mirroring half of the burguer wasn't the best choice.

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Sorry, I didn't mirroring the burger

Army-of-Pandas said:

You still need to fix the perspective and the shape because making it have a front view making the burger look flat isn't good.

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I will see what I can do, but I will have to learn more about photoshop first!

It makes me hungry every time I see it
Still is a bit flat yet, but is good enough. You should think on making a model for it, it would be awesome!

Thanks for the comment To bad I can't do create models.

But u could use this --> http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/krabby-patty-doodad-97169/?prev=search%3Dburger%26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20