I kept all the content, changed some color, and added some simple looking tables.
- I merged bugs and consistency with gameplay in my reviews. I think you should the same and include bug type of things in gameplay
- I changed some colors around to make it more organized. Approval should be green, good things should be light green, and bad things should be any red-like color.
[otable]Review by Rex.
Map: Five Night at Bear's[/otable]
[otable]Gameplay:
The gameplay of this map is quite interesting.
Firstly, I started off with a guy near the wards. The instructions are very clear in this game mentioning all of your duties and whatsoever (well done!).
The atmosphere is just like playing a Slenderman game. However, what kills the scary feeling to it is the music. I suggest you to put a scarier music than what you have put in it.
Good points:-
-I really like the ability to change the guy's status! Well done!
-Clear instructions!
Bad points:-
-Switching camera with typing it isn't good at all... I recommend you to take the previous comments suggestions.
-The music is too normal. Make it scarier!
- Not really scary as what I expected...
Terrain and Decoration:
The terrain has nice contrast and please try to add more height varietion.Good Job on that!
I have nothing to say about the decorations. It has a nice variety of them.
Verdict:
This map has followed all the map submission rules and therefore I support this map to be approved!
Notes:
This map has a lot of potential so please work on it.
Here's my suggestion, make different difficulties would be nice!
and also make the guy to have a lower visibility too. ( make it scarier and fun too!)
Anyway, I suggest Slenderman and Labyrinth fans to check out this one! Work on it Bear_369!
Rating:- 3/5![/otable]