Survival Town 2014 Final

[Moderator]

21:32, 5th Apr 2014
Orcnet:

Review

1. The terrain is bland, it got nothing in it.
2. You have too many location leaks and unit group leaks.
3. During game, It is better if you have hints on what to do. You can even use the quest tab for the things you want to say to the player.
4. I don't know why there is a pack horse. This is actually useless.
5. Goldmines just spawns everywhere. Why not pre-place them and not spawn them. It feels awkward, really.
6. The game says that zerglings are coming into the town. They are not actually going into the town, they just spawn everywhere and walks in an undefined direction.

Suggestions
1. There are so many things you have to do with your map. Why not create a thread in our Map Development section to develop your map and gain suggestions.
2. You might also want to visit the general mapping tutorials and trigger tutorials to hone your mapping skills.

As for this map, it will be a very long process until this will be considered for approval. I therefor vote for rejection.

 

[Dark-Zalor]

By looking to the minimap the terrain looks empty, isn't it?

With 1 ground texture

 

[Heinvers]

Oh my, no tile diversity at all! Why? You must improve that terrain drastically. It's empty.
Edit: Add environmental doodads and destructibles: trees, shrubs, rocks, cattails, flower, logs, stumps, also use the raise/lower height tool. Right now it screams to me: Don't play me, I'm ugly! Sorry:/

 

[ngoc_viet08]

hi

Yes, when you're playing,the scripts will create enemies, gold mine...ect

Why need terrian when it's not really need?

 

[ngoc_viet08]

If you have free time and like the zombie/surivial/defense style, you should try it. I tested 10 times with friends in garena and it play really well!

Thanks!

 

[Dark-Zalor]

Because the player will be bored to have an empty map with the same tile everywhere

 

[Heinvers]

Because the player will be bored to have an empty map with the same tile everywhere

Exactly! Be sure to terrain something. Preferably what I suggested.

 

[ngoc_viet08]

Thanks for your suggestions. However you will not have time to thinking about the terrian. I tested 10 times with full players and most of them are excited.

Sorry to promote yourself but I think that could be a good idea that you can have a chance to play my map.

anyway, I'll try to add some terrian to the map.

 

[Dark-Zalor]

The problem is not only during the game....

The game could be awsome and exiting and addictive

People will see a minimap empty with a unit tile and won't download it
It's not epicwar....
It looks unprofessional and people won't download it (I think)
(it's maybe stupid but it's reality)

 

[Heinvers]

Thanks for your suggestions. However you will not have time to thinking about the terrian. I tested 10 times with full players and most of them are excited.

Sorry to promote yourself but I think that could be a good idea that you can have a chance to play my map.

anyway, I'll try to add some terrian to the map.

At least give it a thought. You'll see that few will play it once they notice that the terrain is empty. Even if it's a low-type terrain, just try (I'm not forcing you, it's useless). Just think about it

 

[ngoc_viet08]

Someone please play this game and give me something
You can play it alone. I'm sure that you will not get boring.

 

[Remixer]

Hehe, what a cute map (seems nice, too bad there were too many zerglings so I could not hold back until the first timer ran out)

You should fix some typos and add hotkeys to the buildings. Also, fix zergling range, they can destroy things built next to walls (from the other side (The wall width is 50 so Zergling range must be less than half of the zergling pathing + 50)).

Keep it up. Seems nice map.

 

[eubz]

Review

1. The terrain is bland, it got nothing in it.
2. You have too many location leaks and unit group leaks.
3. During game, It is better if you have hints on what to do. You can even use the quest tab for the things you want to say to the player.
4. I don't know why there is a pack horse. This is actually useless.
5. Goldmines just spawns everywhere. Why not pre-place them and not spawn them. It feels awkward, really.
6. The game says that zerglings are coming into the town. They are not actually going into the town, they just spawn everywhere and walks in an undefined direction.

Suggestions
1. There are so many things you have to do with your map. Why not create a thread in our Map Development section to develop your map and gain suggestions.
2. You might also want to visit the general mapping tutorials and trigger tutorials to hone your mapping skills.

As for this map, it will be a very long process until this will be considered for approval. I therefor vote for rejection.

 

[ngoc_viet08]

Hehe, what a cute map (seems nice, too bad there were too many zerglings so I could not hold back until the first timer ran out)

You should fix some typos and add hotkeys to the buildings. Also, fix zergling range, they can destroy things built next to walls (from the other side (The wall width is 50 so Zergling range must be less than half of the zergling pathing + 50)).

Keep it up. Seems nice map.

Thanks man This map is built for multi player which is really hard for single player so it could don't let you play more. I should make an options easier for single player.

The range of attach is making me crazy. Actually I set the range of zergling just 40. Maybe there are some building use 72 range which is very long and zergling can attack it.

Thanks!

 

[ngoc_viet08]

Review

1. The terrain is bland, it got nothing in it.
2. You have too many location leaks and unit group leaks.
3. During game, It is better if you have hints on what to do. You can even use the quest tab for the things you want to say to the player.
4. I don't know why there is a pack horse. This is actually useless.
5. Goldmines just spawns everywhere. Why not pre-place them and not spawn them. It feels awkward, really.
6. The game says that zerglings are coming into the town. They are not actually going into the town, they just spawn everywhere and walks in an undefined direction.

Suggestions
1. There are so many things you have to do with your map. Why not create a thread in our Map Development section to develop your map and gain suggestions.
2. You might also want to visit the general mapping tutorials and trigger tutorials to hone your mapping skills.

As for this map, it will be a very long process until this will be considered for approval. I therefor vote for rejection.

Thanks your reviewer, you give me some really good ideas and works need to be done. So I'll take time to take care more.

1. terrain , as I said before. I don't know what terrian I should place in it as there are no need for it. You stand behind your wall and defense with friends

2. I don't have exp with leaks so I'll learn it. Thanks for your suggestion!

3. Yes, I forget about the hints and the quests also!

4. pack horse use to transport gold from gold mine to the home/town . If the gold mine is too far, the survivor must build a safe way to protect them.

5. Goldmines place randomly. This is a idea. I want the game to be random and players can't know where are goldmine to build the home. If not random then it will be easy game as they can get gold mine easy.

I'm also want players expand the town so they can have more fun and connect to other players.

6. Yes, sorry for my bad english. I mean they're coming to this field and maybe come to town to kill players

 

[eubz]

5. Goldmines place randomly. This is a idea. I want the game to be random and players can't know where are goldmine to build the home. If not random then it will be easy game as they can get gold mine easy.

Nope, goldmines are always visible here in the mini-map.

 

[ngoc_viet08]

Nope, goldmines are always visible here in the mini-map.

Did you try to play this map? This map turn off fog and blackmack as default.

 

[ngoc_viet08]

I update final version which are no bugs and very interesting to play with 2+ players right now. I tested on garena and be sure it will working fine.

The map could be reject by reviewer however if you're looking for an fun, playable, hard ... then this map is for you.

There are alot of approve map and making peoples bored and could' playable.