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20:07, 18th Feb 2010
ap0calypse: Approved
Update: Re-moderated with review and rating!
ap0calypse: Approved
Update: Re-moderated with review and rating!
Reasons: Other: If you have any complaints or questions directed towards a moderator, make a thread here: Map Resource Moderation If you think the moderator's judging is unfair or you have overall complaints, make a thread here: Admin Contact Please read the rules thoroughly: Rules Comment: Camera: The Camera work was fine in my view of perspective, but sometimes it would have been better if it was constantly moving, making it more "intense", but the camera movement was smooth. Animations: There were no animations played while People were talking, which you could add to some certain places of the cinematic, but that is not necessary, although it would make it better. Combat: The Combat Scenes we're well made, in the beginning of battles you used the normal attack system, then the heroes/units used custom abilities with some nice special effects. Although they weren't very fast paced, they were nicely made. Environment: The Environment was gorgeous to look at, with forests, indoor, castles... But the only thing that bothered me was the corridor, where Lina and Chase were going to their rooms, it was empty with just one brazier in it. Some Portraits or guards would make it better. Dialog: The Dialog work was also nicely done, except you don't use alot of expressions in it, like "The Time is nigh", but overall the dialogs were acceptable. Story: The Story is intense and you want to know what happens next, but it's not very special, it's just some heroes who are going to kill a demon. But the things that happen while the binders are trying to accomplish their objective. Overall: It was a very nice cinematic, although shorter than the ones before, but you have really improved with each episode. 4/5: Approval Some Other Things: •We Mages are yours command -> We Mages are yours to command |