08:13, 18th Oct 2014
Misha: you need more fluidity in animations, more unique mesh and better wrap of that mesh, since the lower jaw looks very wonky and 'eyebrow' ridges look wonky as well. you could also create real, connected hands, instead of sticking fingers into that 'bump' at the end of the arms

custom texture is totally unneeded

Change the name of the Model instead of milkshapexported

in model editor
edit->Model Properties and there is a name you can change

Edit: Nice Animation, but the death animation need more works, the face looks cute, you make it from scratch?

Edit2: Not sure if it is Ok For moderator, but how bout make it more unique? Like make it more Bulky or something? and Turn it into Shade Lord or something? xd

ah thx

The only interesting animation was unfortunately just the spell animation if this was worked on harder I would think that it could be better and hayate is right on the need for uniqueness.

this is indeed useful, but for model section it's not unique enough, make it more Bulky or add some armour to it xd

i have alot of model get rejected because lack of uniqness

edit: I rate 3/5 for the animation
If you make it more unique, it will go to 4/5 or 4.5/5 or even 5/5 xd

The General said:

The only interesting animation was unfortunately just the spell animation if this was worked on harder I would think that it could be better and hayate is right on the need for uniqueness.

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All of the Animation is good, the attack animation is quite good and the walk animation is more like a ghost (which what a shade is)

thx for the review guys. I will make it more unique for sure. This is my first try on modelling, and wanted to gain some critique on how well this goes along.

I thought about making it more robust and the Armoured Shade Lord's idea sounds so awesome thx for the idea

Will start further works on it next week.

I downloaded it.
However, the shade had somewhat of a purple square around it.