19:39, 22nd Dec 2010
General Frank:

- The walk, attack and talk animations look very unnatural, fast and have very wrong positions.
- TC is good, too much TC is very bad. Please reduce the amount.
- The mesh is good, but on some spots there are very weird looking edges and 'spikes'.

Imo
Tc much...even the shield
- An odd fighting position/anim,
- Stand ready anim movement seem to be originating from his butt.
- Odd sword, also tc.
- He is waving his sword to much in stand anim, this really should be involuntery movement if you know what i mean instead he appears to be consciously waving his sword up and down, anims are hard i also know but this is just plain odd.
- Walk anim remainds me of a running baby which recently did something in his diaper.
That cloth-scarf thing at the back of his neck is oddly wrapped.
Nice banner/cloth on his chest.
Anyway, you obviously did a lot of work into it but in my oPinIoN its incomplete.

The animations are ok, except the portrait animations, wich are way too fast and hectic.

the teamcolour does look extremly akward, as it is poorly coloured. I suggest just making the shoulders and the tabard colour, instead of the whole body.
also, a crystal sword doesn't fit that much for a footman, knight whatever, does it?
and like Em! said, the texture on the scarf thing on his back is totally streched.