#1 Layout seems decent. Reminds me of other maps.
#2 Remove boats, generally disliked feature. Replace laboratory or add a small path for a hero to sneak in and harass. Just don't use boats.
#3 The map has pretty wide paths, this is good. Just add a few chokepoints for strategic play.
#4 Raise terrain height more, add some humps and bumps. It makes the map look more organic.
#5 Good variation of terrain textures
#6 Creeps look fine.
#7 Shop camp is not closed off and players will draw aggro when running past towards red goldmine.
#8 Too many trappers. I like trappers, but 3 is 1 too many in a camp. Im talking about shop camp here.
#9 Same with triple trapper camp, replace 1 trapper with ogre 3.
#10 Islands lack texture and trees.
#11 Not sure what i feel about islands. I think you should have access to them through lab.
#12 Crazy idea here, but if you insist on using boats, put them on the shallow water near base.
#13 If you establish a tower island it will be impossible to stop.
#14 Doesn't feel like theres a whole lot to do in the center.
#15 Both land expansions would be more exciting if they were both orange camps. Your opponent would have to guess where you would expand of the two places.
#16 I feel like you could use space more efficiently. For example with the two tall cliffs in center.
#1 thanks! Its alot like AI ^^
#2 not gonna do this, will be the main feature
#3 did add props and created some chokepoints
#4 did some more raising, hope its enough now, since i already have alot of hills (not really high, but i hate to missclick ingame because of this, so i dont want to raise too many hills)
#5 thanks!
#6 thanks! (there was an error where creeps dropped any random item xD)
#7 edited the shop to be more in the woods and therefore they dont get triggered anymore when u pass by
#8 edited the creeps like u suggested, very good idea
#9 also done!
#10 add textures n stuff
#11 as i stated in #1 - its main feature, not gonna happen
#12 i removed all the ships and placed them in a visible place near the costs
#13 mines on islands have less gold. u cannot lame on my map successfully
#14 added another green camp (spiders, with perma level 1 item drop)
#15 nice idea, but i think the contested mine is well needed
#16 i love my mountains
added some props n stuff, so it should make up for that