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18:07, 24th Sep 2009
67chrome: The shading on the clothing is off, and the yellow trim does not fit with the clothing, it is overly saturated and has no ware near enough shading, making it appear very separated from the clothing. The beard also seems rather uninspired, it is pretty much the same thing as the druid of the talon, and does not look very blood-elven to me. At least it is shorter, but it doesn't work for me. Maybe add a few touches to it to make it appear as if it is not just coming out of the neck and under the chin, make it look more like a real beard, something :/
67chrome: The shading on the clothing is off, and the yellow trim does not fit with the clothing, it is overly saturated and has no ware near enough shading, making it appear very separated from the clothing. The beard also seems rather uninspired, it is pretty much the same thing as the druid of the talon, and does not look very blood-elven to me. At least it is shorter, but it doesn't work for me. Maybe add a few touches to it to make it appear as if it is not just coming out of the neck and under the chin, make it look more like a real beard, something :/