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ap0calypse: Rejected
There are a lot of lacking things in this game.
ap0calypse: Rejected
There are a lot of lacking things in this game.
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Contruction of Stormwind
- Author(s)
- crawdaddy029
- Tags
- Cinematic, Medieval / Warcraft
- Size
- 12.34 MB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 695
- Created
- Oct 21, 2009
- Updated
- Nov 20, 2009
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
This is the first map in a campaign i am making about the story of the Defias brotherhood. it involves the Stonemasons and thier leader Edwin Vancleef as they are exiled from the city of stormwind after reconstruction. Bassically this map will be a playable prelude to the rest of the campaign. please leave your comments/suggestions here and I will see about making those changes.
*update
made alot of changes to this since first realease. mostly the doodads and terrain but did some cinematic changes as well and fixed a few things from before.
*update 2
aparently my last update didnt update the map, sorry if you all downloaded the old map.
Keywords:
Defias, Brotherhood, Stormwind
*update
made alot of changes to this since first realease. mostly the doodads and terrain but did some cinematic changes as well and fixed a few things from before.
*update 2
aparently my last update didnt update the map, sorry if you all downloaded the old map.
Keywords:
Defias, Brotherhood, Stormwind
Reviews
- Joined
- Jun 12, 2009
- Messages
- 4
wow this is a very nice map of stormwind, im an ally player myself so im quite familiar with stormwind and this is a very nice duplicate of it but when i go through it and i see some zones, it seems very spacious and lacks that city like effect.
- maybe some walls behind the houses?
- also outside stormwind at the front where you have a few empty spots of grass just put in some trees and critters mayb. would b a nice addition 2 the terrain.
- on the streets in the center put in white marble to give a more realistic street effect.
Overall this is very impressive 3/5+approval.
Keep up this and put a bit more effort and you'll be doin perfect.
- maybe some walls behind the houses?
- also outside stormwind at the front where you have a few empty spots of grass just put in some trees and critters mayb. would b a nice addition 2 the terrain.
- on the streets in the center put in white marble to give a more realistic street effect.
Overall this is very impressive 3/5+approval.
Keep up this and put a bit more effort and you'll be doin perfect.
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- Nov 10, 2008
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Game - Victory (triggering player) with the message 'something' and etc.
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Game - Defeat (triggering player) with the message 'something' and etc.
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- Sep 2, 2009
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This seems to be a very promising map, and very good copied from wow (Alliance player
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I suggest you:
-fix the tooltip for the stone smiths.
-fix the icons for the architects and their tooltip.
-add quests with the current objectives.
-do as said above: fix some richer terrain
3/5 +approval
)I suggest you:
-fix the tooltip for the stone smiths.
-fix the icons for the architects and their tooltip.
-add quests with the current objectives.
-do as said above: fix some richer terrain
3/5 +approval
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- Joined
- Oct 16, 2009
- Messages
- 137
I see that open zone stuff too as the camera pans around at the beggining, I will add more buildings instead of just blank space with walls.
I totally forgot about the outside of stormwind area, i meant to put that house and GY that are there, thanks for reminding me.
Im actually planing on replacing the streets entirly as i get a working skin that i like. Im finding alot of skins that just arent working including models. he model for the king and the model for Mathis was the only 2 that worked out of about 17 models i DLed.
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- Aug 11, 2009
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Better description-.-,its a rules violation.
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- Oct 16, 2009
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on here or on the map?
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- Aug 11, 2009
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Here in the hive.
- Joined
- Jun 12, 2009
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- 4
give the guy a break. its his 1st and it tells us what we need to know.
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- Feb 3, 2009
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- 3,292
No rules are rules, you must follow them, if he read them he'd know that description must be improved...
Everyone made a "1st map" But i'm sure many still made a good description and so on...
- Joined
- Aug 10, 2008
- Messages
- 1,912
well, it's what i can say:
- SW (Stormwind) doesn't have that kind of bridges in the canal, change them.
- Also the Terrain of Stormwind and outside of it isn't good at all, needs improvement. (Specially Outside)
- When the camera is going to face Edwin Vancleef, it will go into some houses in the way, change the distance and rotation then it won't pass inside the houses in the way to Edwin.
- And why did you make all of Stormwind, like Mages' Quater, The park, Dwarven District when they are not used in the cinematic?
And what should we do after the cinematic?
- SW (Stormwind) doesn't have that kind of bridges in the canal, change them.
- Also the Terrain of Stormwind and outside of it isn't good at all, needs improvement. (Specially Outside)
- When the camera is going to face Edwin Vancleef, it will go into some houses in the way, change the distance and rotation then it won't pass inside the houses in the way to Edwin.
- And why did you make all of Stormwind, like Mages' Quater, The park, Dwarven District when they are not used in the cinematic?
And what should we do after the cinematic?
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I won't give anyone a break... rules are there to be obeyed, not to be brokenshinobhi23 said:
And the hive is a site where maps of an avarage quality will be approved, first map or not, if the quality isn't high enough, or it violates any rules, I reject it without mercy.
Bad things:
- Lack of tile variation
- Lack of doodads
- Bad use of heigher/lower terrain-tool
- Natural cliffs in a city
- All triggers
- Some typo's
- "Default String" as the heroes name
- Without looking at the object data, I immeadiately knew you used the paladin for Edwin (22str, 13agi, 17int, 24-34dmg).
- The camera went through buildings
- Bad description (in-game and on the hive)
- Very short
- You only need 1 worker to end the game
Overall: 1/5 - Rejected
Good, it's about time some people leave...Legion_King Doom's signature said:
- Joined
- Jun 12, 2009
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Ever heard of socialisin mate? we're all here 2 share and have fun. now dont get all fussy over 1 map.
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Lol, I wasn't talking about this map, or the creator of it...
There are just a few people that have to leave the hive for a while because they infest it with their lacking behaviour.
I'm not getting fussy over anything.
Edit: yeah, I know socialism... ever heard of real life?
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I won't give anyone a break... rules are there to be obeyed, not to be broken
And the hive is a site where maps of an avarage quality will be approved, first map or not, if the quality isn't high enough, or it violates any rules, I reject it without mercy
eh, i knew it wasnt best ever but i put a fair share of work into it. If it gets rejected shit happens, currently fixing alot of stuff right now and re-subscribed to WOW just to walk around SW and try to immitate as much as possible.
got a working skin now and making tile variations throught city
3 times as many now
i know, i fail
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i still fail
speaking of fail, i failed Engrish, amazingly enough I aced Latin.
Fixed
yes, need to change agility and str around and make him agility hero
Fixed
Well i put basically everything that happens in the description minus where you walk to.
yes, its a prelude not a full scenario
I swear I fixed this.
anyway i just dont want to make one whole bad campaign so i pt first map up to get idea/suggestions/thoughts so i can implament rest of it, thanks for all the input.
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- Feb 14, 2009
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Ah if someone obeys the rules too much....i call him/her a teacher's puppet but anyway fine terrain i hope you do good on the campaign you might be making.
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- Apr 11, 2008
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Well matey if you want comments post it in here http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/
then when you got alot of feedback and improved THEN put it up here
then when you got alot of feedback and improved THEN put it up here
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- Jan 17, 2009
- Messages
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This seems to be a very promising map, and very good copied from wow (Alliance player
I suggest you:
-fix the tooltip for the stone smiths.
-fix the icons for the architects and their tooltip.
-add quests with the current objectives.
-do as said above: fix some richer terrain
3/5 +approval
Yeah. A very good copy (Horde player
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