17:22, 25th Jan 2016
Apheraz Lucent: As I've commented already, it needs a bit more work to be approved. The background is a bit too distracting, and you might achieve a better effect by zooming out a bit.

The vomit and the way it's leaving his mouth looks very strange and unnatural

I know :| But I don't know how to fix it.

Maybe give it a more 'flowing form' and angle it more downwards.Right now it looks like it's going in a straight line

WhiteFang said:

Maybe give it a more 'flowing form' and angle it more downwards.Right now it looks like it's going in a straight line

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Actually had I not seen the title I would have thought he was eating tall grass, it doesn't really look too much like liquid either as you've deawn all the details in straight lines. I know it probably sounds like I think it's bad, I actually think it looks really good I just think the appearance is miss-selling it a bit.

Is this better?

the zombie is not quite visible imo. the first time i saw this, i don't really know what is this until i saw the title and the big pic. maybe zoom in into the zombie head a little bit?

That's an issue I had when choosing where I should cookie cut it. If I position it so it's head dominant, then it looks like a abomination specific spell, but if I show mostly vomit, it becomes a generic vomit spell for everyone. :/

Add more chunks in the vomit and maybe an enemys remains or an eye, something to make it seem disgusting, at the moment its very confusing.

The complex art of vomit.
I'll try to improve it soon.

I love it man! Keep up the great work!

Thanks Roland

Did you try to zoom out a little? I got a feeling it'd be much better when we could see at least part of the abomination.

Also, green background is a bit distracting. Either tone it down, or darken it a bit