15:42, 4th Sep 2009
oh_snap: I suggest you make the monster more detailed, and take up more of the image, and make the soul he is eating distinguishable from the background.

14th Sept 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.

needs more definition in the monster
doesnt look as good as the rest of the icon.

I love the colours .

Those black spots in the blue stuff...mmm...Souls...
Are supposed to be mouths/eyes, like faces?
Try to define the faces more, like making some colour differences in the souls being eaten, and try to make like... Faint shapes of heads. Like...err... Really distorted skulls seeping into the monster's mouth.
Uhm, I hope you get me. Although I don't expect you to. That was some hell of a bad explanation. 0.o
Sorry, it's kind of hard to explain.

Plus, the monster thingie could use some work. Try to make it look more ferocious, and less like a purple blob with square teeth.

Right now, 3/5 Useful
If you could define the faces/heads/skulls/what-the-hell-ever souls, and improve the blob-ish beast, it would surely qualify for 4/5 or 5/5.
Keep up the good work

EDIT: I just found out exactly what the monster looks like atm. A purple pac-man!

EDIT2: Like TheHunterKiller said, the colour scheme is GREAT! And therefore, I'd like to warn you about my suggestion. If you decide to make colour differences in the flowing souls, make sure the colours match. Like... Don't start mixing in green or red stuff. It would look horrible. At least that's what I think. (I was thinking some purple, perhaps ;P )

EDIT3: First of all, what's with all these edits? -.- Anyways, I'd like to say that I hope nothing of what I stated above seems ironic or sarcastic or condescending. By all means, I don't mean to, in any way, humiliate or offend you. Every word is typed with good intentions.
+ Apologies for the long post. Nobody likes such a big bunch of letters. At least I don't ^^

ok so you want?
Color difference for souls
better work on the beast?
ok i will update soon ^^

You should improve the soul a lot (play with some brighten colors), and the eater a bit.

You need to show more of the mouth and less of the stuff coming out of it.

Army-of-Pandas said:

You need to show more of the mouth and less of the stuff coming out of it.

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OK i will update it tonight or tomorrow but guys i don't know what color uses to paint some souls and what's the problem with creature? he isn´t a clown

souls are lighter, almost white and clear.

you could just dodge the whole thing with some texture

the creature has human teeth and is very flat and cartoony

Yeah, because you know what souls look like. XD

if you compare it to warcraft's, then i guess.

The monster lacks detail, but overall i like the icon, 4/5

Here's what I mean about making faint outlines of a distorted skull or head by those black spots.
Behold, the (probably) most famous norwegian painting ever, "Scream" by Edvard Munch.

Try making weak outlines (with a darker/lighter colour variation of blue, or maybe purple) of a head kind of like the screaming person's head.

And about the colour differences, I would suggest you try putting some purple in there. (Not too much though, just a little.)
And like mentioned, the soul devourer thingie looks like a recoloured pac-man with teeth. Try making it more... Dragon-like or reptile-ish.

The souls look cool, but the monster looks... odd.

Yes, I know you can find everything I just said in the above posts. Doesn't mean I can't say it.

make some faces in the blue mist or fog whatever it is...

all i can tell is a big red mouth screaming at a dotted blue blob. more definition would be nice.

I can see you updated it, but the monster could still use some work.

Monster looks really, really strange now D:.