08:15, 15th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Add a better visible caster, which can be seen jumping, unlike this one, since the lacking flame effect takes too much space. Try re-designing the shape of the flame, to make it look more realistic and use a different color.

zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

this looks like a bad flame, not a jump and a slam

You know in Warcraft 3 there is a cheat; Thereisnospoon.

This cheat was modified and applied to this icon. It now is ; Thereisnoorc.
Hehe, anyways the flame is made quite well but it just looks like a line of flame in the middle of darkness. Could use some work

Its nice, but abit weird.
3/5

well at first there is no orc?

and it's hard to see what's happen in it
for now, it doesn't look like a jump, nor a slam

I see no "Jumpslam" here.

I see only flame.

Aye, i darkened the orc too much... he was a nice grom lookalike, but he acc got too dark, now he nearly blends with the sorroundings... I know there's no slam... it's while he's still in the air ^^

*Somnium Hehe, lol XD

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/spells-569/jump-slam-v1-02-a-139571/

There's the spell i made it for...

Now, lemme show you the orc, the faint reddish plack to the left of the hmhhm... slammin' sword... that's the orc, if you look closely, you can make out one of his tusks, a faint eye (near-invisible) and the darkness on the lover part of his arm, just below the yellow-orangeish 'flame'

nice try 5/5

Lol, thanks ^^ i've seen better, if the sword was alone, i guess it'd be worth 5 ^^

A huge mess of randomness. Can't really make out anything.

Nay... i know, look at the spell, and you'll maybe get it...

Then show me the spell, or at least a screenshot, so I might be able to give you suggestions on what to improve.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/spells-569/jump-slam-v1-02-a-139571/

here you go... i posted it a bit further up, thought you knew.

Very cool man, maybe too dark 5/5

Oh thanks ^^ Yeah, it got too dark. Good to know that i got talent, although i supposedly made a mistake.