18:33, 22nd Mar 2010
enjoy: Make the blade more straight, cause it looks like it bends. Add highlights, and make the shading stronger. Try to go to www.deviantart.com and in the search thingy, try to search for tutorials for background effects, and then try to change the background so something alittle more detailed. Rejected untill updated.

Looks good but, the blade needs more shadows and highlights and at the bottom right it is to empty.

Nugamentum said:

Looks good but, the blade needs more shadows and highlights and at the bottom right it is to empty.

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I will work on that, but i dont know what to draw in the bottom right corner..
Maby an orc, thats about to get choped by the balde but that will be hard

You gotta work on your shading bud. Fix that.

It's kinda weird that only the left part does have a background instead of the right side.

But it seems it's because of the slash effect... so I think it's ok, but still a black background doens't fit too much, maybe you can add it something so it won't look too empty at the right side, like a little glow or something...

Also remove that gray border that surronds the sword, it makes it looks like a drawing.

I hope you fix it, if you do, it will look great! =)