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11:53, 28th Sep 2009
Zombie.: The usual mess of randomness. Would be rather useful, but the quality is incredibely low. The swords are distorted proportion-wise, they'd need better contrast to have the fire effect distinguished from the metal, which also needs more highlights. Preferably, the addition of a better-visible fire, not consistant of smaller parts, but a big one as it is would be good, but it's just a recommendtation how to improve it, as it is vital. Also, the shading (?) on the handle is random, remove the spots and observe other shading methods.
Rejected until updated.
Zombie.: The usual mess of randomness. Would be rather useful, but the quality is incredibely low. The swords are distorted proportion-wise, they'd need better contrast to have the fire effect distinguished from the metal, which also needs more highlights. Preferably, the addition of a better-visible fire, not consistant of smaller parts, but a big one as it is would be good, but it's just a recommendtation how to improve it, as it is vital. Also, the shading (?) on the handle is random, remove the spots and observe other shading methods.
Rejected until updated.