BTNfireswordfight

[Moderator]

11:53, 28th Sep 2009
Zombie.: The usual mess of randomness. Would be rather useful, but the quality is incredibely low. The swords are distorted proportion-wise, they'd need better contrast to have the fire effect distinguished from the metal, which also needs more highlights. Preferably, the addition of a better-visible fire, not consistant of smaller parts, but a big one as it is would be good, but it's just a recommendtation how to improve it, as it is vital. Also, the shading (?) on the handle is random, remove the spots and observe other shading methods.

Rejected until updated.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

Dist looks terrible... What have u done?

 

[Revolve]

Don't say it look terrible.

Well, you have alot to learn. First of all, the shading. You have baely used any shadings, on the shaft, the sword. The fire is not at all interesting, and doesn't look particulary real either. And the motion... Well, the picture is not interesting, would rather feel as 2 swords standing there rather than 2 swords actually fighting. Background could be better aswell.

 

[Dentothor]

it looks terrible. Scribbles and a bad BG.

What have you done indeed

 

[Rmx]

Damn it looks like Flaming Wings

 

[Chief-Oblivion]

Instead of creating a new icon, try fixing your old ones until they're up to an acceptable standard then take note of what you did on the one you fixed up to create new ones. =/ Because yes, this does look pretty bad.

 

[Panda]

Truthfully i don't know what to say.

 

[Deuterium]

Well, needs work on details to start with... and zoom in...

 

[adrianwho]

how do you make images

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Adrian check the tutorials ._.
Oh well, more shading and...other stuff, i don't know what to says.

 

[enjoy]

Needs more shading. Also maybe fix shape on the handles.
The fire looks awesome.