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Moderator · Jul 15, 2009

12:28, 16th Jul 2009
zombie2279: The concept is not bad. Try putting some more emphasis on the cracks, they get really lost on the full pic and working on the cross' shading after resizing. You can't really see its depth on the resized version.

zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

Somnium · Jul 15, 2009

Yaaay

Big Picture

Godslayer · Jul 15, 2009

first of all you should make atleast the shape synchron.
if you do that the icon would look much better i think

Somnium · Jul 15, 2009

huh ? What do you mean make it synchron ? xD

-Somnium

The Panda · Jul 15, 2009

Review,
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1:Looks quite nice man,
2:Shield needs to be a bit bigger.
3:Also, the shield could use some more detail but it looks fine at the moment, good job.
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(All my recommendations to your icon, you can choose to use these or not, your choice.)
Thanks, Army-of-pandas.
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Somnium · Jul 15, 2009

Yeah, i know am gonna make the shield bigger definatly

But waiting for more suggestion before updating

-Somnium

~Void~ · Jul 15, 2009

The object itself is quality, but the glow could use work/removal. I suggest you zoom in to the object a little more so that it fills up almost all of the icon space, and then add some kind of effect around it, but make sure to leave some black background showing.

Right now it's a 3.

Godslayer · Jul 16, 2009

Somnium said:
huh ? What do you mean make it synchron ? xD

-Somnium

i mean that this shield is shown from front perspective, but the 2 sides (left/right side of the shield) are not synchron, you can also see that @ the fin al icon, so i´d suggest you to take an earlier version, mark one half of the pic, copy it, and mirror it. ofc u have to redo the effects after that.

attached an example of what i am talking about

The Panda · Jul 16, 2009

Looks good man update that thing.

~Void~ · Jul 16, 2009

Godslayer said:
i mean that this shield is shown from front perspective, but the 2 sides (left/right side of the shield) are not synchron, you can also see that @ the fin al icon, so i´d suggest you to take an earlier version, mark one half of the pic, copy it, and mirror it. ofc u have to redo the effects after that.

attached an example of what i am talking about

I would agree with this, but now there's no shading at all. Maybe if you put some brightness on the top and some darkness on the bottom, it would look better. Remember not to screw up the saturation.

breebree123 · Jul 16, 2009

nice. .and useful i think. .4/5

krisserz · Jul 16, 2009

I don`t like this lines on the shield. They look stupid. Maybe just leave some of them?

Somnium · Jul 16, 2009

Oh yeah, they were meant to be a glow thing but i think i'll maybe take them out since you asked

Potluck · Jul 16, 2009

your style of iconism is interesting... i like it!

only reckon the glow needs to be a different colour or a larger area of white so shield stands out more

The Panda · Jul 16, 2009

Not what i planned but you may wanna make it little smaller like medium size then add the background you had before.

krisserz · Jul 16, 2009

It could be smaller a little, and I think now that you really should remove that lines. They look... terrible.

Somnium · Jul 16, 2009

Yeah guys i will remove those lines, make it jsut a litle smaller, and add the old background.

And yes my style of making icons is diffrent, I am inspired of Guild Wars icons, I just simply love them. Thanks for the support and i will not be able to make something today so I will do 2 icons tommorow.

Take care all.
-Somnium

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