War Of Dark Throne V.1

[Moderator]

17:52, 22nd Jan 2011
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Like I asked the previous map to, prove this isn't trash and give us a better description.

 

[-Kobas-]

Can you improve your description and describe your map even better, I don't understand how to play it... Please add some screenshots as well!

 

[JGGDMakervb6]

Is this the first time you upload a map here?
If you are, You should improve your desc. very much. Add some screenshots

One more question
If this is an update, You should just update your old one by clicking update button then upload the update map.

Edit: Someone to help you, Is this map protected?

 

[Pourquoi]

Here's a list of BB Codes to help you improve the description.

 

[DarkForce]

umm how do I change the description and how to add screenshot?

 

[P4C-M4N]

And how about you don't double post?

 

[DarkForce]

okay done it, no double post. Umm did you guys mean map description in game or details.

 

[P4C-M4N]

This description on the forum. Improve it before your map get rejected.

 

[DarkForce]

forum? did you mean description below this map (above)

 

[P4C-M4N]

Yes below the map.

 

[Icedrake]

And how about you don't double post?

Sheesh man, go easy on the guy. He's new here, and it's not like you've never double posted in your life.

 

[Pourquoi]

If this is for test, then it should be posted on the Map Development forum.

 

[DarkForce]

map development forum? by the way how to lock the controller to computer not user? and can you guys tell me or give me a link on how to create best map with good description.

 

[P4C-M4N]

Sheesh man, go easy on the guy. He's new here, and it's not like you've never double posted in your life.

Dude i just ask him i wasn't mean at all. You can see that i'm trying to help him.

map development forum? by the way how to lock the controller to computer not user? and can you guys tell me or give me a link on how to create best map with good description.

You can ask me about the description, i can make some terrain for you too. Just PM!

 

[DarkForce]

You can ask me about the description, i can make some terrain for you too. Just PM! [/QUOTE]

really? ok then but i got to go to sleep now (sorry for bad english mon)

 

[Icedrake]

Once you update this map with some more things, I can create a description for you. Just give me a link to download the map once its got a few more things added to it for me to create the description for you.

 

[P4C-M4N]

Well Vardix can make you a good description and i can make the terrain for you if you want.

 

[Wazzz]

Interesting.... two people offering their services towards a map they know nothing about.
Anywho, as has been stated before, as this is a TEST map, it should be on the map development forum, not the map section. Please do not do this again, otherwise you will most likely be punished by a mod.

 

[DarkForce]

I want to know how to lock the controller into computer and what wrong with my description? here is the download link at epicwar http://www.epicwar.com/maps/155383/
one more thing, test map should be on map development forum? Do i have to upload this map to map development forum?

 

[mckill2009]

the thing is, nobody want this map coz of poor description...if the description is good (maybe not too good) but in details, then players will have interest in playing it...

make screenshots and give us a full detail of your map...I suggest you put it in map development first and ask for help...

 

[light bolt30]

Read the submission rules seriously, you're breaking a few. Also in your description you could tell us; how to play the map, anything special, heroes, items, screenshots, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. You should also make a thread in the Map Development Forums if the map is incompleted or you just need more ideas for the map or just need to gather people to help you make the map. You should also leave a link or upload the map in the thread so people may also test it for you. This will be rejected in its current state.

 

[DarkForce]

hey guys how about that? I re-edit the description by the way mckill2009, i don't know how to add screenshots.

 

[mckill2009]

hey guys how about that? I re-edit the description by the way mckill2009, i don't know how to add screenshots.

Post the picture in the pastebin, then use copy the IMG link...then in your description use BBcodes like "

" (that's without quotes)...but I strongly suggest to post it first in the map development thread to improve your map...

 

[DarkForce]

ok then, I post what to map development thread? by the way to capture the screen i must push the prtscrn button right, so where did it put the picture?

 

[mckill2009]

use a program like paint or powerpoint, paste it there, then save as jpg...

 

[DarkForce]

ok I already got the picture and paste it in the paste bin but how to add it to description?

About hours: Yes I get it how to add screenshot, how does my description look?

 

[mckill2009]

for better understanding, see this >>> http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/importance-description-127031/...its a MUST to read...

post your map in the development area and tell us what you want, I can help you with triggers & spells...

 

[DarkForce]

umm post to development area?

 

[GIANT_CRAB]

lolwut the hell, this map, just by judging from the mini-map and the comments given by other people, I already knew this is so going to be Rejected.

 

[ap0calypse]

The terrain is very weak: you shouldn't use blizzard cliffs this much (it really, really doesn't look good), you should use more environmental doodads, remove all cinematic doodads, rivers should be made with raise/lower terrain, the tileset variation is quite bad.

Idem for the triggers (memory leaks, inefficient).

Too much random imports and NO CREDITS GIVEN.
The tooltips should all have the same template (some of your tooltips have a nice layout, others don't - these should all look the same).
Spells have been poorly edited, same goes for a lot of creeps.