the blood is overused and horribly done, you probably just took a color layer and sweeped red pen thru it. blood have a unique texture, if you simply recolor something to red like you did it will doubtfully look like blood.
The overused blood is a lack of creativity, and it also makes the skin pretty boring and not attractive. oh yes nice halloween ghost on his book.
that's a recolor, nothing really changed, maybe the face, but its minor changes. i'd say it's not undead, it's more like a paladinw ith ketchup on him with a ghost on his book and a head with black eyes.
take more efforts on your skin, if this is your first skin, please do not skin again, do freehand it looks way better. it may be longer to do, but that's the whole point of skinning : freehanding, otherwisely you just change the colors of someone's work, that's lame and obviously unchallenging.
on the other hand, it must've been pretty challenging for you to recolor :lol: