Ursa Spell Pack

[Moderator]

12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: Too long as NeedsFix. Rejected.

08:57, 10th Feb 2014
BPower:
Again reviewed on 16.2.2014
There is too much wrong in here. I recommend you to go through
some GUI for beginners tutrorials in our tutorial section.

 

[Kazeon]

post the trigger pleaseeeeee
How to easily post trigger

I'm sorry dude, but you must make it MUI to be approved here. in it's current state now, it will instantly be rejected

but dont worry, I'm here to help you. just ask anything you want to know to me

 

[GIMLI_2]

first thing: why do you create a dummy that casts bloodrage on your hero? just use berserk and you're fine
second thing: your ulti works wrong. the damage will stay the same if you cast it, no matter if you are loosing life after the cast.
third thing: see top comment

 

[mohamy]

ty for suggest
this is my first post
fix it.

 

[Andser]

Even if you are a big fan of this hero don't post it as your first thing, try with something easier (i have too started with Bradwarden ), not as hard as Ursa (Altough it is easy).
1/5
MUI? do you even know what is that?
Dummy for Berskerk? wtf?
Bad Triggers and all that

 

[Kazeon]

Even if you are a big fan of this hero don't post it as your first thing, try with something easier (i have too started with Bradwarden ), not as hard as Ursa (Altough it is easy).
1/5
MUI? do you even know what is that?
Dummy for Berskerk? wtf?
Bad Triggers and all that

please, stop giving bad rating.. I know there is no rule about this, but think about it, how if I come to your resource and say "this is bad" and give 1/5, what do you feel?

 

[zv27]

Even if you are a big fan of this hero don't post it as your first thing, try with something easier (i have too started with Bradwarden ), not as hard as Ursa (Altough it is easy).
1/5
MUI? do you even know what is that?
Dummy for Berskerk? wtf?
Bad Triggers and all that

What could be easier than this !?!???!? Ursa is noob muhahaha
post trg dude

 

[War3I4i]

Damage given from ult is not accurate...

 

[Andser]

please, stop giving bad rating.. I know there is no rule about this, but think about it, how if I come to your resource and say "this is bad" and give 1/5, what do you feel?

i don't give bad rating but it doesn't work, i don't mind if you rate my resources
1/5 so you can start.
Gimli_2 said it too, bad, not mui

 

[Wrda]

First of all:
- Andser
Don't say content which doesn't help the person to improve his resource
Don't post things that flame the person, neither trolling. Your post will be deleted and/or you will be given negative reputation.
Don't troll.
Secondly:
- mohamy
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/spells-569/gui-dynamic-indexing-template-144325/?prev=search%3DDynamic%26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20%26c%3D114%26t%3D65
Read this carefully, it shows you how to make spells MUI.

 

[nhocklanhox6]

muhahaha

What kind of "haha" 0.0, never seen this before ^^!

@mohamy: I love your name , and nice spell with the beautiful description about Ursa (Although i never play the map called "dota").

My Rating:

Hero Description: 4/5
Spell Description: 4/5
Spell Trigger: 3/5

You stored

• Set DamageBonus_Unit = (Triggering unit)

, but you don't use it ..If you don't use it, i will use and you will getting lost that variable ^^~ "muhahaha"

• Enrage Cast
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Begins casting an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Enrage
  • Actions
    • Sound - Stop (Last played sound) Immediately
    • Set DamageBonus_Unit = (Triggering unit)
    • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
      • If - Conditions
        • (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 1
      • Then - Actions
        • Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.05 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit))))
      • Else - Actions
    • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
      • If - Conditions
        • (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 2
      • Then - Actions
        • Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.06 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit))))
      • Else - Actions
    • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
      • If - Conditions
        • (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 3
      • Then - Actions
        • Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.07 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit))))
      • Else - Actions
    • Trigger - Run Enrage Damage System <gen> (checking conditions)
    • Wait 15.00 seconds
    • Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1
    • Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+10) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1
    • Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+100) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1
    • Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1000) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1

Final Rating: 4+4+3/3 = 3.6666667

4/5 and + rep for a great job and welcome to TheHiveWorkShop ....

If you want to know more about World Editor, i will help you.

Here's my profile: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/nhocklanhox6/

Feel free to contact me ^^...

 

[Kazeon]

you should alert him to learn more about triggering too
before he thinks that his triggering is good enough..

 

[Daffa]

• Waits = not MUI
  unless uses local instance. It's also pretty inaccurate.
• Don't use Unit is Attacked, use a DDS

There are more, but more or less many has talk about them.

 

[Adiktuz]

nhock is pretty kind, 4/5 for a spell pack this buggy-prone? 0.0

but really, first thing to learn is how to remove those waits...

 

[Monzaru]

umm overpwoer? i think overpower you said.

 

[Druu]

I mean, isn't Fury Swipes the Fire Lord's Passive ? That would explain why it is an orb effect in DotA.

I'd do it with triggers without being an orb effect.

Is Enrage being recalculated or is it a one time activated based on missing health and if you're healed you don't lose damage ?

 

[mysharkqla]

Fury Swipes dont working . its add 0 damage ,when attack on enemy units.
can you make it trigger. for Fury Swipes i need that!

 

[IcemanBo]

Thats way too simple and not well coded. You really should look in some gui tutorials. You can find a link in my signature.

And I think abilities that are or can be done only by object editor are not a very useful addition in spell section.

You should only concentrate on triggered spell, and try to make them useful and unique.

not good [c] good

If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions) If - Conditions (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 1 Then - Actions Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.05 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit)))) Else - Actions If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions) If - Conditions (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 2 Then - Actions Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.06 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit)))) Else - Actions If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions) If - Conditions (Level of Enrage for DamageBonus_Unit) Equal to 3 Then - Actions Set DamageBonus_Value = (Integer((0.07 x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit)))) Else - Actions

Set DamageBonus_Value = Integer((0.04 + LevelOfAbility(Enrage) for DamageBonus_Unit / 100) x (Life of DamageBonus_Unit)

4/5 and + rep

I understand that he is only a beginner, but sorry I do not understand how this can be seen as "recommended" at it's current state.

Waits = not MUI unless uses local instance. It's also pretty inaccurate.

He uses TriggeringUnit after the wait, so it can be treated like local.

But the example by nhocklanhox6 instead was not good:

not good [c] good
Set DamageBonus_Unit = (Triggering unit) .... Wait 15.00 seconds Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+10) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+100) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1000) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1	Set DamageBonus_Unit = (Triggering unit) .... Wait 15.00 seconds Set DamageBonus_Unit = (Triggering unit) Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+10) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+100) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1 Unit - Set level of Item Damage Bonus (+1000) for DamageBonus_Unit to 1

Try to work more on it and maybe you will get some cool ideas, but dont forget to look at some tutorials to improve your coding.

I wish you good luck with improving this ressource.

 

[Sakurinha]

thanks, that will be useful 3/5