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Upcoming Campaign: Space Station Alpha

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This is the loading screen for my new upcoming campaign - Space Station Alpha. These will be coming in parts one at a time. The loading screen is for Stage One: The Beginnings.
 
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Seems very plain. You could put some graphics into it.

The following words are also spelt wrong:

Wronge = wrong
Transfered = Transferred
disapearances = disappearance(s) [its not actually a word.]
begginnings = beginnings

Also "thats" should be "that's", and lose the comma after 'These'.

Hope this helps.
 
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