Undead Blade Master Skin

[SuperCow]

Hi, i've made a undead blade master skin a while ago and suddenly found it again. I'm thinking about taking up the work again and improve it.

But.. The problem is i don't know what to improve, because it's some of my first skins and i'm not that good in it.

So if i could get some suggestions it would be great

 

[Revolve]

It's blue lol, make it look more pale
Also remove the open-stomach. Doesn't look good with BM wrapping

 

[SuperCow]

yeah, but if i remove the open stomach is abit little freehanding in it

 

[Revolve]

Yeah? So what's the problem =D GO FREEHAND

 

[Squidle]

This is rather a badly wounded Troll Blademaster with that color...

And try to do something more special things with the sword.

 

[Bu113t]

he dosnt ecactly look dead, just reeeealy sick and wounded... but you should sharpen and adding more shades and highlights.

 

[Hawkwing]

I like it, though the whole brain-head thing doesn't look great. The open stomach looks nice to me, but I think you should work on the skin tone. Try a pale green/blue.