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Undead battle v1.01
- Author(s)
- Rajaco
- Tags
- Shooting / FPS, Modern Warfare
- Size
- 183.61 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 35
- Created
- Nov 2, 2010
- Updated
- Nov 8, 2010
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
The terrain is by Eternal Epix, all the triggers and people are by me.
Marine:
You are a marine that was for some reson stationed in a town in the middle of nowere. Your board, but want to help with the government run testing. So you run around and try to get rid of all the creeps, and dicove somthing more...
Undead:
You play as the scientists and there test subjects that were were shot at, blown up, irdiated, and many other things. Your goal: KILL ALL MARINES.
Marines revive 2 minuts after diying, so they don't leave after death.
Undead can't revive heros, but he/she can build buildings and units.
I don't know why but I can't seem to make brown stay computer.
Keywords:
Guns, Undead, marines, hero, shooting.
Marine:
You are a marine that was for some reson stationed in a town in the middle of nowere. Your board, but want to help with the government run testing. So you run around and try to get rid of all the creeps, and dicove somthing more...
Undead:
You play as the scientists and there test subjects that were were shot at, blown up, irdiated, and many other things. Your goal: KILL ALL MARINES.
Marines revive 2 minuts after diying, so they don't leave after death.
Undead can't revive heros, but he/she can build buildings and units.
I don't know why but I can't seem to make brown stay computer.
Keywords:
Guns, Undead, marines, hero, shooting.
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- May 2, 2010
- Messages
- 45
this map is 100's of times better than my first.
- Joined
- Feb 3, 2009
- Messages
- 3,292
The Description still breaks the rules, please improve it.
- Joined
- Apr 17, 2009
- Messages
- 3,572
I test it now, I will make you a review.
Okay yeah, not very much to be tested.
1.Terrain
The terrain is not bad, but it doesn't fit the theme to well.
What the hell makes a marine in a harvest forest?
A futuristic terrain or a different story, without marines would be better.
2. Gameplay
Gameplay wasn't special.
Just some marines with some unfitting standard blizzard abilities placed in the middle.
Then some randomly placed enemies.
You just walk around and kill. Boring.
No special events, no interesting skills, not items at all, no variation in enemies.
The skills were completely random and didn't fit at all.
The marine had the icon and the soundset of the pit lord, doesn't fit.
The name was Default String.
That's no quality at all.
The quest entries were just few white words. Without any efforts, just smashed together.
You made this map in a hours or what?
Sorry, but the gameplay how it is now, is much to simple, boring and monotone.
It's not acceptable. You need some cool quests or some special events.
Also futuristic elements would be cool.
Make some custom skills, never seen before.
Import some stuff.
3. Coding
You just have a few little triggers, which don't really do anything special.
They also leak.
4. Aestetics
No quality and aestetic.
No beautiful imports, no nice descriptions.
Everywhere just basic work.
A loading screen would look fine.
5. Description
Not enough information on your map.
No screenshots.
I recommend checking Kobas signature, where you can find a template for a good map description for the future.
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All in all I have to say, that this map is far to basic and low quality.
You have to work more on your maps and think of something special.
In this stage it's boring to play your map.
Sorry, it's just not good enough.
Maybe you can improve it with some of my suggestions, but you have to make it a lot better to make it aprovable.
I just can rate it with 1/5 -> Rejection
Greets
chilla_killa
Okay yeah, not very much to be tested.
1.Terrain
The terrain is not bad, but it doesn't fit the theme to well.
What the hell makes a marine in a harvest forest?
A futuristic terrain or a different story, without marines would be better.
2. Gameplay
Gameplay wasn't special.
Just some marines with some unfitting standard blizzard abilities placed in the middle.
Then some randomly placed enemies.
You just walk around and kill. Boring.
No special events, no interesting skills, not items at all, no variation in enemies.
The skills were completely random and didn't fit at all.
The marine had the icon and the soundset of the pit lord, doesn't fit.
The name was Default String.
That's no quality at all.
The quest entries were just few white words. Without any efforts, just smashed together.
You made this map in a hours or what?
Sorry, but the gameplay how it is now, is much to simple, boring and monotone.
It's not acceptable. You need some cool quests or some special events.
Also futuristic elements would be cool.
Make some custom skills, never seen before.
Import some stuff.
3. Coding
You just have a few little triggers, which don't really do anything special.
They also leak.
4. Aestetics
No quality and aestetic.
No beautiful imports, no nice descriptions.
Everywhere just basic work.
A loading screen would look fine.
5. Description
Not enough information on your map.
No screenshots.
I recommend checking Kobas signature, where you can find a template for a good map description for the future.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all I have to say, that this map is far to basic and low quality.
You have to work more on your maps and think of something special.
In this stage it's boring to play your map.
Sorry, it's just not good enough.
Maybe you can improve it with some of my suggestions, but you have to make it a lot better to make it aprovable.
I just can rate it with 1/5 -> Rejection
Greets
chilla_killa
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- Joined
- May 2, 2010
- Messages
- 45
ok, Like the brown CPU thing: no matter how hard I try I can't seem to fix the default string thing, but I will fix Icon and sound set.
- Joined
- Apr 17, 2009
- Messages
- 3,572
For the Default String, you have to give the Hero a name.
- Joined
- May 2, 2010
- Messages
- 45
i finished fixing the default string, now i'm adding stuff.
Edit:
k i'm done with the other stuff.
Edit:
k i'm done with the other stuff.
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