Tinkeureka

[fladdermasken]

My apologies if the name is too corney >.>
Here it is anyways, Tinkeureka!

Tinkeureka

Feedback appreciated.

 

[Azurot]

Very nice, but like I said on MSN no snow on the rocks plox!

 

[fladdermasken]

Very nice, but like I said on MSN no snow on the rocks plox!

Easy fix, and yeah those rocks looked horrible >.>
Done.

 

[PROXY]

I see no snow. =)

nice pic

 

[Ramza]

That looks really good. Reminds me a bit of Ratchet and Clank.

Can't come up with anything that needs to be improved right now.

 

[Oziris]

I like it, but the canter of the picture is empty. You need to put something there, maybe add the big Tinkeureka there and also, clouds aren't the best solution for the background IMO.

 

[PROXY]

Though, you realise that the tnt-barrels are GIGANTIC?

 

[fladdermasken]

I like it, but the canter of the picture is empty. You need to put something there, maybe add the big Tinkeureka there and also, clouds aren't the best solution for the background IMO.

I personally think that adding more would make the picture too cluttered. I'll see if I can think of something to add. You'll have to develop your thoughts about the clouds though.
Thanks for the feedback.

Though, you realise that the tnt-barrels are GIGANTIC?

I do now. Thanks for pointing it out.
+rep to all

 

[PROXY]

Jeah, speaking about the middle. one (little) island wouldn't hurt. but not something that covers it up nearly completly. I love the sky, it gives... such a warm feeling

 

[The_Olorin]

WALL-E ! ! ! No actually it is very good picture and its hard to think how to make it more perfect.
+ rep

 

[fladdermasken]

WALL-E ! ! ! No actually it is very good picture and its hard to think how to make it more perfect.
+ rep

Thank you. Rep never arrived though, haha.

Jeah, speaking about the middle. one (little) island wouldn't hurt. but not something that covers it up nearly completly. I love the sky, it gives... such a warm feeling

Thank you very much.

 

[FibSaSk]

Great
The only thing I noticed is that you should add something in the center, or move somehow the tinkeureka to the center. I like the eyes and the...eh... leg?
Continue doing your great job.

 

[~Void~]

Too much empty space. Makes it boring.

 

[Cihparg]

Well, as Void told you, it's quite empty.
Also, I'd like to tell me my own opinion.

So, currently it looks more of a doodad spam, than anything else.
The rocks for examble, are quite damn repetitive.
You could add some steam stuff around there & there, not just on little places, because that is what this terrain is? A steam city?

Well, anyways it's nice you've got even this far, but do some improvements, and i'll give it a second review.

For now: 4/10

 

[~Void~]

The rocks for examble, are quite damn repetitive.

This, and, just one thing I've noticed from my experience: lots of little rocks = bad. Try to find a way around using small rocks.

 

[fladdermasken]

Thank you both for the feedback.
I probably won't update this as it seems it was a poor terrain to begin with.
Fixing every little mistake I made would pretty much mean I'd have to redo the entire picture anyways, and I have neither the time nor the energy to do that.
So I'll persevere and learn from my failures.

 

[~Void~]

That's what I always do. It blows massive donkey cunt to change things once you've added the final touches.

 

[Dr. House]

man the name is so ...... xD anyway i like the terrain but why dont put a freaking big space ship in it? xD anyway +Chocolate cookie baked by DR. House himself you know thats tasty right?