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Clandestine Cabin

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New terrain I finished just recently, feedback is welcome and appreciated. :D
 

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The doodad variation is a bit much. Also suggest you take a look at Void's tutorial. It would help this particular terrain a lot.
 
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Right, I'll get to work and post a new one as soon as I can. Thanks guys.

How did you get the idea of mixing red sky with rain?! o_O

Just a thought, is this bad?

How did u do the house did u made it out of doodads or it was like that ?

It's a bunc of log house doodads in the UTM, I believe it's the log house kit by xXmorpheusXx @ wc3c
 
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Kind of. It doesn't make sense. I have seen many a rainy day, and many red skies, but never together.
 
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New screen, I fixed some things and changed the sky. And how would it be better with wind, Belgarath? o_O
 

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Both are very good. The problem with the first though is the tileset. It doesn't go at all with the fog and sky; However, the sky and fog went together great. Some other problems with the first one was how the house looks like the edge of it is floating a bit and well... the terrain is too green for that sky and fog, sorry. But the second is a large improvement I think. Good work!

~Craka_J
 
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I liked the red sky, but I didn't liked the rain. Well, you fixed it, and now it is better.

You could lay down the elevated "pile of earth" in front of the screen. It wil give a better look to the terrain.

And more trees could be added at the background.

Nice terrain, IMO.
 
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