Clandestine Cabin

[Troubadour]

New terrain I finished just recently, feedback is welcome and appreciated.

 

[Oziris]

Bad things:

1. I see some flying rocks
2. I dont like the rock infront
3.Add i light fog
4.I dont think that the sky fits mybe add fogged sky
5.Delete the ugly big yellow grass

How did u do the house did u made it out of doodads or it was like that ?

 

[Nudl9]

How did you get the idea of mixing red sky with rain?!

 

[NinjaDino]

this is dreat, i like the rock infront and blizzard sky woud be better
nice cabil, nice grass, nice bumps and all

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It is nice but can become better.

Add a fog.
Change the sky.
Remove the big rock.

 

[~Void~]

I like the fog+red sky effect. However, I don't think you are consistent enough with your doodad use. Variation is good, but not too much.

 

[Gilles]

The doodad variation is a bit much. Also suggest you take a look at Void's tutorial. It would help this particular terrain a lot.

 

[Troubadour]

Right, I'll get to work and post a new one as soon as I can. Thanks guys.

How did you get the idea of mixing red sky with rain?!

Just a thought, is this bad?

How did u do the house did u made it out of doodads or it was like that ?

It's a bunc of log house doodads in the UTM, I believe it's the log house kit by xXmorpheusXx @ wc3c

 

[Gilles]

Kind of. It doesn't make sense. I have seen many a rainy day, and many red skies, but never together.

 

[Belgarath]

Remove the rain and make it windy, take the rock away in front and it'll be a lot better.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Actually rain would be better if you made the time go little later.Like making it night.A night with a rain.Romantic.

 

[DungeonM]

I've seen red skys and rain, either way, if it looks good does it really matter? 90% of the terrains here aren't very realistic anyway, I've never heard of a troll ruins being discovered in real life.

 

[Troubadour]

New screen, I fixed some things and changed the sky. And how would it be better with wind, Belgarath?

 

[Gilles]

Huge improvement! I like it a lot more. It gives a good sense of a dreary wet day.

 

[~Void~]

Note:
For the hills in the background, make sure no gaps in the trees show. And make them look like not just a giant line of trees on top of a ridge, place some behind the hill a little and lower them.

 

[inverted]

i think it looks great except the rock infront is lowpoly, and low res and looks bad upclose id scratch that. keep up the good work

 

[Oziris]

Much bether then the last picture !

 

[Craka_J]

Both are very good. The problem with the first though is the tileset. It doesn't go at all with the fog and sky; However, the sky and fog went together great. Some other problems with the first one was how the house looks like the edge of it is floating a bit and well... the terrain is too green for that sky and fog, sorry. But the second is a large improvement I think. Good work!

~Craka_J

 

[Troubadour]

:O I didn't notice that the log house was floating. I'll fix that.

 

[Naze]

I liked the red sky, but I didn't liked the rain. Well, you fixed it, and now it is better.

You could lay down the elevated "pile of earth" in front of the screen. It wil give a better look to the terrain.

And more trees could be added at the background.

Nice terrain, IMO.

 

[Hawkwing]

Not the greatest sky and large clumps of grass. Sink the rock infront down a bit. Make sure none are floating. This looks pretty good but unless you make some bigger trees in the background it will look way to open.