the story of kael part 0... intro

[Moderator]

10:10, 7th Aug 2009
Linaze: Overall of too low quality to be approved. Read some of the comments for some pointers and use the Map Development forum for future development.

 

[Malcous]

Wow , a 30second cinematic

-too short
-bad terrain
-bad grammar

1/5

 

[tysej4]

Wow , a 30second cinematic

-too short
-bad terrain
-bad grammar

1/5

thanks improments my last one had 0/5 haha thanks you lifted my soul

 

[tysej4]

Wow , a 30second cinematic

-too short
-bad terrain
-bad grammar

1/5

its not to short there will be atleast 300 other episodes

 

[Malcous]

its not to short there will be atleast 300 other episodes

Ok , but you have to fix the grammar...

This could help:

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[tysej4]

Ok , but you have to fix the grammar...

This could help:

Click

what is grammar!!!

what dose it mean plzz tell me

im from denmark i normaly speak and write danish

i dont no what grammar means!!!

 

[Cyper95]

lol it have stuff to do with he/she/it

 

[tysej4]

lol it have stuff to do with he/she/it

and what do that mean!!!

 

[Cyper95]

alot it changes some of the words how they are spelled and now i must ask how old you are.. ??

 

[tysej4]

alot it changes some of the words how they are spelled and now i must ask how old you are.. ??

14 years but i can still make maps i dont got any patience...

you now what i mean!!!

and remember i come from denmark we dont use words like grammar we use words like mojn du hvordan går det

and so

 

[Cyper95]

i come from denmark to and that aint no excuse and you can figure i have the same age as you so you should prolly just get better at english
AND WE DO HAVE GRAMMAR!!!!!!!! Translation: Grammatik

 

[tysej4]

i come from denmark to and that aint no excuse and you can figure i have the same age as you so you should prolly just get better at english
AND WE DO HAVE GRAMMAR!!!!!!!! Translation: Grammatik

ohh im just not good terrain thats simply my weakest part

 

[Cyper95]

ok how much time did you spend making this map??

 

[tysej4]

ok how much time did you spend making this map??

umm 1 hour

 

[Cyper95]

i got one word for you.. lol

 

[Malcous]

i got one word for you.. lol

agreed :O