The orc 1.6.5

[Moderator]

01:51, 9th Feb 2014
Hell_Master: Map rated 1/5 (Unacceptable) and Awaiting Update. See my review here: Review

Orcnet: Map is not updated till now

 

[Lordofth3cl4n]

to take screen shot hit print on your keyboard..

 

[ILH]

fix the descriptions please.

EDIT: i played and won the first battle, with 1 grunt survived (health very low) and the raider (health low) then i destroy the gate and they come again, and slaughter my forces... any hints for this?

 

[Binsu]

Fix the descriptions, make it much more presentable (the description reflects how much of a good map you have, you won't leave a description too bad when you have a great map right?) and here we go, another map from you. I hope this has the decent quality that it needs to be approved and also hoping this is a COMPLETED map.

Fix that name also of your file. It just proves this is not a completed map but I won't judge a book by it's cover.

Will play and give you a review later.

Use Kobas' Template for Descriptions (you can find it on the page when uploading a resource, there is a link there) or Vengeancekael's Description Generator that can be found in the Tools Section of the this site.

EDIT: Played the map and good to say, it's a completed map but does not have the enough quality yet to be approved. The map has a decent difficulty and you need to protect your Raider and don't let it die. You must go to countless waves of enemies to finally reach the final boss which is an Undead Halls of the Dead.

There is nothing much interesting in the map except for that hack n slashes maps are fun but it really needs something more in it to be better. Add a hero for the orcs as well and should be the one protected. And seeing you are quite limited on its gameplay, I suggest you to focus on improving the game's designs and visuals. Terrain needs to be better, it still needs tile variation at some points and the terrain lacks some good details in it. It is also too flat. I would also suggest you to add a custom fog into it and possible a weather as well.

For the triggers, it looks quite neat and it has some proper names. Nothing much more to say

Some suggestions, change the file's name to something proper rather than Test. It looks bad and proves that this looks incomplete which you would not like the user to think. The Map's name should also be fixed. The map does not only involve the humans and orc here but the Undead as well. Improve the game's overall designs and visuals starting with the terrain, giving unit a new kind of customized spells instead of standard Warcraft 3 spells (search at the Spells Section for some), give the bosses some more thrills. They simply attack and they have weak stats except for the Mountain King, it actually posed a threat to my team. The Halls of the Dead final, boss battle is not that worth or not that enjoying to fight. What it only does is attack. Give it the capability to summon units when it reaches a percentage of it's life and some more great spells that will make the final boss much more harder.

Lastly, fix your grammar errors in the game. There's too many.

Overall, I would rate this 1/5 (Unacceptable) for now but not Rejected. I am Awaiting some Updates from you for this has chances to be of a great hack n slash map to be honest with you, Awaiting Update.

 

[Daffa]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/map-description-generator-1-2-a-224558/
Use this if you don't want to get hassle in making description with BB Codes.

 

[mohab500]

is there someone made frenzy and cut before me? )_)

Hell's
master fix the hero's tale pls it is making me sad everytime you post something

Dear ILH: there are serval enemies NOT one enemy only
if you have 1 grunt on low health and 1 raider what you do is go to fountain and attack them there i think you can't win i really go out with 2-3 grunts and half health raider
1 thing also
Edit:WIll add 2 new spells for grunt and make the raider a hero
and I CAN'T USE THE GENERATOR IT IS STRANGE-LOOKING
and i will make AI for heros
Wewll triggered AI

Awaiting my own Update too
BYE NOW

 

[Binsu]

Stop quadruple posting and posting unrelated topics such as relating to my map. Please do post it in my own thread instead of here. I give you -2 rep for doing such a rule breaking act.

 

[mohab500]

Edit:A new Revenge-Seeker Hero
New name for the File
New description
Bots can now Use spell
Made less units
The last boss is hard now
Blood Mage Can now Cast Spells
The Map's Name is now "The orc 1.6.5"
The last Boss can now Summon Units every 5 Seconds
Now Acolytes restore the hero's HP instead of giving units
Now killing the three acolytes gives 2 Units
Game is now "Harder"
The 2 Missions are chat-written,Not in the quest menu



Reason to make units Less:
The Revenge-Seeker got a Huge damage and got some Powerful Spells That is why i wanted to make the units less

 

[mohab500]

Map edited and thread deleted,thanks for the warning

Fix the descriptions, make it much more presentable (the description reflects how much of a good map you have, you won't leave a description too bad when you have a great map right?) and here we go, another map from you. I hope this has the decent quality that it needs to be approved and also hoping this is a COMPLETED map.

Fix that name also of your file. It just proves this is not a completed map but I won't judge a book by it's cover.

Will play and give you a review later.

Use Kobas' Template for Descriptions (you can find it on the page when uploading a resource, there is a link there) or Vengeancekael's Description Generator that can be found in the Tools Section of the this site.

EDIT: Played the map and good to say, it's a completed map but does not have the enough quality yet to be approved. The map has a decent difficulty and you need to protect your Raider and don't let it die. You must go to countless waves of enemies to finally reach the final boss which is an Undead Halls of the Dead.

There is nothing much interesting in the map except for that hack n slashes maps are fun but it really needs something more in it to be better. Add a hero for the orcs as well and should be the one protected. And seeing you are quite limited on its gameplay, I suggest you to focus on improving the game's designs and visuals. Terrain needs to be better, it still needs tile variation at some points and the terrain lacks some good details in it. It is also too flat. I would also suggest you to add a custom fog into it and possible a weather as well.

For the triggers, it looks quite neat and it has some proper names. Nothing much more to say

Some suggestions, change the file's name to something proper rather than Test. It looks bad and proves that this looks incomplete which you would not like the user to think. The Map's name should also be fixed. The map does not only involve the humans and orc here but the Undead as well. Improve the game's overall designs and visuals starting with the terrain, giving unit a new kind of customized spells instead of standard Warcraft 3 spells (search at the Spells Section for some), give the bosses some more thrills. They simply attack and they have weak stats except for the Mountain King, it actually posed a threat to my team. The Halls of the Dead final, boss battle is not that worth or not that enjoying to fight. What it only does is attack. Give it the capability to summon units when it reaches a percentage of it's life and some more great spells that will make the final boss much more harder.

Lastly, fix your grammar errors in the game. There's too many.

Overall, I would rate this 1/5 (Unacceptable) for now but not Rejected. I am Awaiting some Updates from you for this has chances to be of a great hack n slash map to be honest with you, Awaiting Update.

Map edited and thread deleted,thanks for the warning