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The Night Wish

Submitted by dts0301
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
The Night Wish

From the creator of the Bloodline, I present a short (4:30) music video to Nightwish - Nemo.

Synopsis:
This cinematic tells a tale of a powerful witch who has lived a long, long time in solitude. A fateful night, she wishes an end to her loneliness and seeks companionship... through the methods she knows best.

Polishing
-A loading screen...?
-A filter for the title at the introduction


Credits listed at the end.
Comment and rate.

Keywords:
music, video, night, wish, witch, demon
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The Night Wish (Map)

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Re-moderating with review and rating! [img][c] Date: 2011/Oct/15 15:23:27 Vengeancekael: VM // PM: Rep Received: 0[c]Reasons: Other: If you have any complaints or questions directed towards a moderator, make a thread here: Map Resource...
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    Comment: Camera :

    The camera work is just excellent, unlike any other cinematic I've seen so far. Nothing else to say here.

    Terrain :

    Like always, you've created an astonishing world, the forest, the village, all the effects you've used, ...

    Story :

    The story is interesting, you've told the watcher the story by showing him everything instead of people talking to each other. The music also made it more entertaining.

    Animations :

    You've also used a lot of different animations, for example the father with his child, or the woman while channeling.

    Other :

    -No typos
    -Excellent description

    Hiveworkshop :

    You are not breaking any rules.

    Overall :

    I would say you've put a lot of effort into this and I'm happy that you're still keeping the cinematics section alive, this cinematic is just top notch, I don't think there is anything wrong in this cinematic, everything is perfect. Good work.

     
  2. Junpei

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    Elow to you


    can u make the description more . .. .




    :fp: 1/5 Reject!
     
  3. light bolt30

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    Use these BB Codes to improve the looks of the description; it'll attract more people.
     
  4. Zenonoth

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    Rating 4/5 until updated..
     
  5. dead-man-walking

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    What the fuck. Seriously. This is a cinematic. You don't have the right to rate a cinematic 1/5 until you see it.

    Seriously. Just look at his cinematics before this.
     
  6. dts0301

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    Don't really know what else to add... its a cinematic soooo theres no gameplay.
     
  7. Darkzealot_128

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    Wow Jun, don't rate a map 1/5 for bad description, you should just ask for a better decription instead of rating.
     
  8. Vengeancekael

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    A cinematic by dts, must check it right away!
     
  9. Crave.

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    Great, but why does it close my entire warcraft program once its finished?
     
  10. dts0301

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    I actually have no idea. I thought that was just me, but I guess it crashes there... I'll take a look at it.
    Quite a coincidence that it occurs RIGHT at the end.
     
  11. Vengeancekael

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    Review - The Night Wish

    A cinematic by dts0301

    Camera :

    The camera work is just excellent, unlike any other cinematic I've seen so far. Nothing else to say here.

    Terrain :

    Like always, you've created an astonishing world, the forest, the village, all the effects you've used, ...

    Story :

    The story is interesting, you've told the watcher the story by showing him everything instead of people talking to each other. The music also made it more entertaining.

    Animations :

    You've also used a lot of different animations, for example the father with his child, or the woman while channeling.

    Other :

    -No typos
    -Excellent description

    Hiveworkshop :

    You are not breaking any rules.

    Overall :

    I would say you've put a lot of effort into this and I'm happy that you're still keeping the cinematics section alive, this cinematic is just top notch, I don't think there is anything wrong in this cinematic, everything is perfect. Good work.

    Final Rating : 5/5
     
  12. Septimus

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    You should have elaborate more about the reason such as telling people that description that are lacking detail are against the submission rules to avoid misunderstanding.

    Even though description are part of the rules and it was common sense for a map to have proper description, most of the people have an misunderstanding guidelines (Technically) when it comes to description.

    In this case, I seen the description to be short. However, it provide the necessary detail such as sypnosis and it was properly structure.

    Actually he does have the right to vote the map 1/5 if it was unacceptable (In term of submission rules).

    Sadly, his elaboration was poor and cause the misunderstanding. In this case, both sides are right and nobody are to be blame for.

    He just post 1/5, but he really did't rate it.

    Well, you could add a screenshot in a hidden tag. It is up to a person to view the screenshot.

    Of course, ss is just a bonus to make description look better.

    Instead of saying unfinished, I recommend you to use other phrase for it cause it sounds like you just upload a map without completing it at all.

    I would review this map when I have the time.
     
  13. Vengeancekael

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    I don't think people should actually vote 1/5 if they think the description is not acceptable, instead just vote for rejection.
     
  14. SeReGGa

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    WoW! it's awesome!
     
  15. Tutnitweh

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    Very good cinematic like always dts!!i hope you will end the bloodline cinematic because i cant wait for next part :cute:
     
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    It's unbelievable how everything in the cinematic is just perfect. It's really amazing, i love the music (i'm a nightwish fan), i love the story, i love the camera...
    6/5. I will show it to all my friends ^^
     
  17. BlackKnightTGS

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    One of the best cinematics I've seen in a while :grin: 5/5 and Vote for Approval!
     
  18. Kusipukki

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    it was cool :D 4/5
     
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    No words can express what im feeling after watch this cinematic...
    Its just amazing